Jenny 3
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mikegarland/Michael (981)
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from benr/Ben (471) 
on January 26, 2003 7:44:30 PM CST
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The shoulder thickness hurts you here as in the one with Jenny wearing the hat. Tilt her a bit. The fireplace takes away from the portrait. Keep shooting.....
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Jenny 2
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mikegarland/Michael (981)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:42:39 PM CST
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I like this one the best of all 3 Jenny's posted. The pattern in the shirt thins out her shoulders. Her body is slightly angled. Very nice. The only other thing is the fire looks like it is coming out of her hand. Move Jenny to the right just a tad.
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Jenny 1
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mikegarland/Michael (981)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:39:28 PM CST
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You Asked, here you go. I think the hat blends in too much with the black background. I don't like the fact that her shirt is not tucked into her jeans. If she turned a bit, she would have plumbers crack. I think she would look better if she was turned so her front area was toward the camera a bit. She is a very cute girl but, shooting her side does not make her look her best. You want to take the thickness away from her shoulder area. I hope you take these comments as a...
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A perfect Autumn Day.
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ptsong/Philip (6,329)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:28:57 PM CST
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The word in the description of this photo describes it. Perfect. The focus issues could be the scan or the jpeg creation. This happens to my photo all the time with PhotoSig. Very Nice
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Surreal Church in Rawdon, Québec
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kafrifelle/Kafrifelle (36,721)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:26:06 PM CST
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Everything is great but, I think the sky looks fake. Retouch this in PS and it will perfect...
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68636.v1/marco (2,662)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:23:33 PM CST
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Just one thing. It looks like she had 2 sets to breasts. The elbows are not in a good place. Other than that, very nice color and idea...
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Medieval Times
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padidier66/Pedro (3,335)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 26, 2003 7:18:15 PM CST
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Very nice. I would crop the trees about 1-2".
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Boiling Sea of Ice
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clif/Clif (2,720)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 23, 2003 7:37:49 PM CST
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Very Nice
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Bedford Reservation #2
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jamesgreenfield/James (2,051)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 23, 2003 7:09:00 PM CST
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One of your best...
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Packard OneEighty
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jamesgreenfield/James (2,051)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 11:00:18 PM CST
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Nice Job Jim...
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View from Kerry Park
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teski/Mike (701)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 10:53:47 PM CST
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I like this picture. I don't know why others have not looked at it.
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Relax
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srogers/Steve (1,927)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 10:33:59 PM CST
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This is just a relaxing photo to look at. Nice Job.........
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Long Day
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srogers/Steve (1,927)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 10:32:53 PM CST
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I love the color of the water. It looks golden. Great Photo....
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bobsacamano/Bob (599)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 10:28:39 PM CST
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Food for thought.....I would have moved her hair to behind her shoulders. Also, the white ground or what ever that is kills the picture. It is much too bright. Other than that very nice first nude pic...
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Winter Field
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mach/Sean (1,532)
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from benr/Ben (471)
on January 19, 2003 10:21:06 PM CST
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Very Nice Photo. I enjoy everything about it and I don't give 3TU often.
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