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Downwind, Aeroflex (6)
af12338904/Russell (8,454)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on September 5, 2002 12:28:43 AM CDT (1)

I'm more bothered by the haze than by the bit of the plane in the picture. I guess the photo isn't of great public interest, it's a nice snapshot anyway.

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scendendo da "senza titolo" (3)
tinto/Alessandro (1,929)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on September 5, 2002 12:25:54 AM CDT (0)

The bush blocks the view on the sunlit building. Without the bush there would be something to look at, this way the picture is pretty empty, though.

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Black Eyed Susan (5)
arthill/Art (1,517)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on September 3, 2002 3:25:07 AM CDT (0)

Good composition and sharpness. The background could be better though.

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Georgia's Geranium (14)
rrstesiak/Renald (183)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on September 1, 2002 1:19:58 AM CDT (1)

There are some nice shapes in this photo but all in all I find the red tone is too much in your face, not subtle enough.

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Tessellation to fade (17)
esskay37/Stephanie (453)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2002 12:18:20 AM CDT (1)

Very cool! It's a pity that the pic you uploaded is so small.

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Lonelyness (6)
eike/Eike (4,093)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2002 12:12:32 AM CDT (0)

I find the pillars to be too dark but other than that I like the mood.

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Good morning inCastellan (Fr) (6)
shalhevet1/Yigal (5,905)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2002 12:09:06 AM CDT (2)

I wouldn't crop the houses. I would zoom out more and show the foreground. The picture looks a little bit too compressed the way it is but it's still a nice atmosphere you've captured.

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Festa dei Candelieri a Sassari (6)
bandit600/Fabio (1,302)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 29, 2002 3:49:13 PM CDT (1)

Decent press picture. It's somewhat irritating that you can't see the faces of the men in the foreground.

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Condo in Progress (5)
muncybr/Brian (745)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 25, 2002 3:18:37 PM CDT (0)

I don't really find the building that interesting...can't see much more sense in it than to document the building process. Artistically, it might work in a series.

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Tissue study (5)
odeleon/Oscar (462)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 25, 2002 3:14:17 PM CDT (1)

Very cool fractal! At first I thought it was a pretty boring and bland picture but the dark trees/branches look really good.

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Roadside View (4)
amcneil/Alistair (6,633)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 25, 2002 3:11:35 PM CDT (1)

A typical color print film picture. The clouds are blown out and the colours look pretty flat. The scenery is very nice and would look better on slide film, eg. Velvia.

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Reclining (9)
pamakine/Pasi (751)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 23, 2002 6:38:14 AM CDT (0)

Cool pic! I find the soft focus interesting. Agree with Chris in that it would look better without the trees in the background.

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Paris repeats (7)
gur42/G (328)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 21, 2002 12:55:52 PM CDT (1)

The angle is too small for my taste. I don't know where Anne sees sharpness because the pic is clearly too soft.

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feeding time (7)
stevenparrott/Steve (1,232)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 18, 2002 2:20:35 PM CDT (1)

Light and focus are fine, I don't find the butterfly overly exciting though.

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tunisia (3)
30140.v1/claraine (25)
Thumb-up    from tob/Tobias (573) Send mail to this user on August 17, 2002 1:03:41 AM CDT (0)

I think Derrick summed it up quite accurately. The place looks very interesting. You might want to walk around for a while and look for an interesting angle. Explore the location before you take pictures.

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