Sea of Colour
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lakeshore/Chuck (215)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)  
on May 17, 2013 12:47:01 PM CDT
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Hi. A beautiful image with a great potential. Apart from the level issue, that can be easily corrected, the line of the horizon is a bit too centred. A lower point of view could solve this, and would add more depth to the perspective. Regards.
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Entertainer at Taj Mahotsav
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suchit/Suchit (24,336)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 13, 2013 3:08:11 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine documentary portrait, with a very natural expression. The background wall perspective provides a good sense of depth. The use of black and white is an interesting choice, but a colour version could also work well. Regards.
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Discussion on the stairs
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jmrosz/Jan (203,844)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 13, 2013 1:32:03 PM CDT
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Hi. The colourful sari of the first woman makes an interesting contrast against the sandy background. The position of the women on the stairs gives an interesting composition, I wonder if a bit lower point of view could be more effective. Regards.
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suburbs
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fantasma/Gennaro (2,334)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 13, 2013 1:27:51 PM CDT
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Hi. The use of black and white gives the scene a kind of look that reminds me the classical neorealistic Italian films. The square crop works well. Perhaps a more intense contrast could be good for the image. Regards.
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an open book
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vonprond/Franz (19,929)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 13, 2013 1:19:36 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine "book portrait", with an interesting point of view, different of the classical fully open. The use of black and white is a good choice here, and allows a good rendering of the paper texture. I just wonder if a bit less closer crop could have been good for the composition. Regards.
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Growing up in a digital age
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georgejung/Mato (2,302)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 13, 2013 1:13:45 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine composition. It's amazing what can be done with a camera phone when you have a creative view. The use of black and white and the square crop are a good combination. Maybe pushing a bit more of the contrast could be good for the graphical look of the picture. Regards.
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" The Lamp "
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anjohan1/Andreas (6,155)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 10, 2013 3:38:54 PM CDT
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Hi. While the image is well performed regarding lightning and colour, the composition could be improved. A lower point of view would be good for the perspective, and isolating the lamp from distracting elements (curtain, etc..) could be more effective. Regards.
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Turkey Vulture
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davev/Dave (11,819)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 10, 2013 12:50:41 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine bird portrait with a good control of the depth of field. The twisted branch is an interesting compositive element. I wonder if as square crop could work with this image. Regards.
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Garden Flower
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npaoni/Nicholas (16,091)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 9, 2013 2:57:23 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine macro shot. The narrow depth of field provides a fine blurred background. Placing the flower more to one of the corners of the frame could be good for the composition. Regards.
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Infinite Reflections
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pwhysall/Peter (212)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 9, 2013 1:50:53 PM CDT
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Hi. A good use of the wide angle perspective to get a good sense of depth. The light is also good. Intensifying the contrast with an "S" curve in PS could be useful to make the scene more vivid. Regards.
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Lines of architecture IX
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michal235/Michal (123,054)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 9, 2013 1:47:46 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine abstract composition. The use of black and white is a good choice here. An square crop could be an interesting option for this kind of image. Regards.
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Rows
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albertog78/Alberto (575)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 9, 2013 1:38:17 PM CDT
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Hi. The combination of greens and red provide an attractive scene, improved by the horizontal crop. I must agree about the lower point of view; it would also help to bring more depth to the composition. Regards.
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red headdress
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doug99/Doug (4,655)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 9, 2013 1:20:19 PM CDT
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Hi. A fine bird portrait, well composed in with a good control of the depth of field. The almost uniform green background helps to simplify the composition. I just wonder if a bit closer crop could be good for the image. Regards.
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Sabie Huisie
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ursulakoekemoer1/Ursula (4,555)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 8, 2013 12:53:20 PM CDT
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Hi. A really beautiful light, that enhances the nostalgic mood of the scene. I just wonder if a more eye-level view could have been good for the composition. Regards.
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The Old Square, Prague
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jkjond/John (8,134)
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from hectorn/Hector (30,754)
on May 8, 2013 12:43:07 PM CDT
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Hi. Interesting cityscape. The high contrast between shadows and light provides a mystery atmosphere quite attractive, and the square crop suits well the composition. I must agree with Jan about the sky, I wonder if adding a subtle noise could be good for it. Regards.
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