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Asylum Seeker (6)
barguest/Mike (1,700)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 25, 2010 7:46:36 AM CDT (2)

I agree, it is a bit overexposed. But I actually like the broken box, it gives the photo a story, as if the subject broke it and is claiming they didn't.

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Baker woman (16)
samias/Asghar (3,654)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 19, 2010 6:32:35 PM CDT (7) Early critique

I like how you can see the whole cooking process in this one photo. I also like the movement and the lighting, good job!

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Bzzzzzzz (3)
adias/Adi (110)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 19, 2010 8:36:52 AM CDT (1) Early critique

I think you should crop out the empty space on the left, there's no need for it. Also, the flower is a mess, the colors are washed out and it's not clear. But like how you captured the bee midair so clearly.

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oevt/Oscar (32,620)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 17, 2010 5:24:06 PM CDT (4) Early critique

I don't think this photo is bad but it could be much better if she were in a different pose. She looks really uncomfortable, almost in pain. Maybe if she wasn't hunched over she would look better.

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College of Nursing (2)
arjen/Arjen (20,433)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 17, 2010 6:32:20 AM CDT (7) Early critique

The only thing I don't like about this photo is the persons shoe ( or I think it's a shoe) Try cropping that part out. I would like this photo more if only three chairs were visible, and the top of the chalkboard wasn't crooked but that can be easily fixed.

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Last Night's Moon (2)
ciapalajm/Jodi (14)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 16, 2010 3:45:37 PM CDT (-2) Early critique

Honestly, this photo has been done millions of times. It's boring because everyone has seen a photo exactly like this one. You also have some grain, it's either because the ISO was too high or you zoomed in too far to make it look clear. Or maybe I'm just picky :)

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Singing bowls from Nepal (3)
jfregon/Jim (3,929)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 16, 2010 3:37:38 PM CDT (4) Early critique

If the bowls are the main subject you should try to crop out the persons feet at the top of the photo and the boxes. I would crop it so the little statue would be more the main subject of the photo. (By the way how big are those particular singing bowls? We had one in class that was the size of a regular bowl and it made a really loud sound. I'm just curious)

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lavender (4)
harshalym/Harshal (53)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 16, 2010 7:04:58 AM CDT (3) Early critique

I don't like that the flower is in the center of the frame, it's boring. Also, the petals are too out of focus at some spots.

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Jaguar (2)
photoplayer1/Wayne (819)
Non-conforming thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 15, 2010 4:17:16 PM CDT

Overall I like this photo, but the background is kind distracting.

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goose (4)
kerby/Kerby (1,906)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 15, 2010 4:14:48 PM CDT (2) Early critique

Overall I like this photo, but I don't like that the goose is in the center of the photo. I'd like to see more of the reflection on the water.

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alive pinks (3)
rckislife/Cagdas (126)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 15, 2010 4:11:34 PM CDT (0) Early critique

The background is distracting from the flower because it has lot's of things going on in it, and because there's such a huge space there. I like the lighting, though you should try a different angle to get rid of the busy background.

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Calm of night (-1)
danbwr/Dan (288)
Thumb-down    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 15, 2010 4:07:50 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Next time use a lower ISO because it creates grain in a photo. The colors are boring and you should have made the sea more of the main subject of the photo. I don't like how the lights from the pier make the photo have an unnatural look to it.

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Big Ben (2)
james181160/James (3)
Thumb-up    from watermelonkisses/Evelina (134) Send mail to this user on September 15, 2010 6:59:46 AM CDT (4) Early critique

You should try taking off the date, it's really distracting. I also think that you should have taken this from a different angle, this one makes your photo look distorted. But I like the detail of the clock tower, I've never seen someone take a photo of it up close.