Lady Liberty
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tipd5000/Gerald (33)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268) 
on September 13, 2010 9:52:19 AM CDT
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Very nice picture. The lighting is a little harsh because of the time and sun. The warm light earlier would have been nice I think. It looks a touch hazy in the background also. Maybe a polorizer would have helped.
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Hamburger Man Surveys His World
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gitlin/Scott (5,175)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 13, 2010 9:48:01 AM CDT
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If you are aiming atr nastolgic, I think you hit it. This looks like an antique. The lighting goes very well with the subject to make it look very antique. I does seem as though you were aiming high to avoid the ground and people, we get just the glimpse of hair from one head.
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arbiche/Arbi (655)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 13, 2010 9:40:54 AM CDT
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The lighting looks very good to me. The picture is very focused on the model, but her hand is a little blurred. To me the cigar looks too awkward in her hand. If you want smoke, maybe a cigarette would be better.
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Beach Walker
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jazzcollector/Adam (728)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 12, 2010 10:08:36 AM CDT
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I think that it is a good try. You should have more space in front of the girl so it doesent look like she is walking out of the picture.
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Tokyo Night View
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silvermist/Manabu (326)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 10, 2010 11:29:36 AM CDT
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Very good picture. Good exposure and focus. Maybe you could have raised the camera slightly to get the entire Tokyo Tower. It seems like a prominent part of the picture because it stands out, but is cut off at the top.
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gosalvez/A. (1,541)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 10, 2010 11:25:06 AM CDT
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I think the lighting is great, the sharpness is very good. The pose is very good. I like the way she is looking directly at the camera, and good expression.
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reminiscent
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hezza8/Herrick (114)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 9, 2010 2:00:21 AM CDT
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I think the lighting is good, the focus in just where it should be, the depth of field is good. I like the expression on the model. You could also do a little larger portrait, but it is also good with this cropping.
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Spanish girl
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paolodes/Paolo (4,615)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 8, 2010 2:25:50 PM CDT
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Very good picture. The lighiing is good and the subject is in sharp focus with the background out of focus. I agree that the line on the left is a little distracting, but it matches the one on the right side. Maybe if the model was centered in front of the dark window, it would even out the lines in the back.
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Mr. Summer Time
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swapfileonline/Kok Weng (1,439)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 8, 2010 2:20:36 PM CDT
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Very good picture. The composition tells about the man. Good lighting, and the focus us sharp. The ropes are focused and add to the character of the man.
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S. Portrait (4) HK
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pinox67/Giuseppe (572)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on September 1, 2010 6:23:35 PM CDT
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I am not a big fan of highkey, but I like this picture. I think the darker background just behind the face makes the face stand out. The eyelash of the far eye is the only issue for me. Maybee turn the head just a little to see the eye, or away so you do not see the eyelash. It is distracting because it is so black.
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My Hannah
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dlounsbury/David (10)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on August 18, 2010 1:42:10 PM CDT
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I think that a portrait style would be better showing the full face. I think the cropped face with all of the greenery to the sides is distracting.
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jpringlephoto/John (16,926)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on August 18, 2010 1:26:06 AM CDT
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I like this very much. Avery good concept. The drawbacks are the lighting is a touch dark. The long exposure is tough to have the model stand still long enough, so the movement makes it look out of focus.
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ve2
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reflejo2/Victor (1,317)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on July 28, 2010 5:24:10 PM CDT
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It is a good picture. I think maybe it could be improved by moving to have the sun a little more to the center of the picture that way the light would not overpower the arm and the face. The rays in front of the models face are distracting.
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Panorama in Sedona, AZ
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jhechter/Jeff (1,432)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on July 26, 2010 10:47:17 AM CDT
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Very pretty scenery. I think that there is just a little too much shading by the clouds, dulling some of the pretty colors of the sandstome.
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Doing It My Way
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dommy007/DOMENICO (464)
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from vfrrfv40/Ronald (268)
on July 20, 2010 12:08:54 AM CDT
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I like the concept very much. I think the focus needs to be a little better. I also think that if you swing the camera to the right to get all of the tail of the kite instead of the city would be another possibility. It looks like your model is having lots of fun which makes the picture fun.
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