S.04. Only the young...
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oevt/Oscar (32,254)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)  
on May 18, 2013 5:09:36 PM CDT
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This one is better to my taste. She looks nice and her smile is pleasant. Colors and lighting are pleasant. Just red tone might be checked to be toned down and compared. Cheers, Mehrdad
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weeping for no reason
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evita7/Aviva (4,396)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 18, 2013 4:50:53 PM CDT
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Overall good shot, but it is too much small. I also think something is missed there. A tree, silhouette effect, nice sky colors, but what else? maybe a bunch of birds in the sky or an aircraft? I don't know. Cheers,Mehrdad
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The snail
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homayoun/Homayoun (3,081)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 18, 2013 4:48:49 PM CDT
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Crispy sharp macro shot dear Homayoun. Also have very good DOF. I might only compose it more diagonal than this. Cheers, Mehrdad
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El Marlin
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davemanroth/Dave (522)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 18, 2013 4:46:37 PM CDT
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Nice job, but taken in a harsh sunlight. Maybe you would better use ND filter. A man or a person at the end of the boat, looking to the horizon would complete the composition in my opinion. Cheers, Mehrdad
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Irati
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enizmon/Enrique (966)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 18, 2013 8:02:51 AM CDT
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Dear Enrique, that is wonderful view of the nature. Colors are fresh and vivid. I might just not include the left side tree. TFS, Mehrdad
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Naghshe jahan Square
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niloofar502000/Niloofar (3,661)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 18, 2013 7:58:50 AM CDT
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Lovely historic place dear Niloofar. I missed it despite of being there last year. Image is colorful and finely composed. The sky color is not that nice blue but can be enhanced in post processing. I feel few problems in leveling issue. 1.5TU. Best Regards, Mehrdad
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S.03
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oevt/Oscar (32,254)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 17, 2013 11:40:27 PM CDT
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As you described, her beauty dose not come up well in the screen, I feel her eyes and face got less light or her makeup gives wrong feeling for her beautiful face. As Edwin stated, cropping could be a bit loser. Cheers, Mehrdad
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Eat and Run II
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npaoni/Nicholas (16,158)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 17, 2013 11:37:04 PM CDT
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This is a nice sharp bird shot dear Nick, but the birt has little contrast to the background and is not popped out well IMHO. Otherwise, could be perfect one. Cheers, Mehrdad
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Poyrazlar Lake/Sakarya/Turkey
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akiskan/Ismail (34,744)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 17, 2013 10:57:03 PM CDT
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Dear Ismail, thats wonderful panorama photo, but why it is too much small? I think you have much more room for the size of photo than what is here now. Contrast and sharpness look to be great. Best Regards, Mehrdad
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White Rhododendron
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arek0michalak/Arkadiusz (1,159)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 17, 2013 10:48:57 PM CDT
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Beautiful flower and nice composition indeed, but I would clone out some distracting bright spots and small areas just in the bottom right corner. Border fits for it properly. Cheers, Mehrdad
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down by the night street
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lacod/Alexander (16)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 17, 2013 10:45:02 PM CDT
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A good sepia shot and fine lighting, but it needs some cleaning and cloning of distracting objects too. Contrast can be even better. Cheers, Mehrdad
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Bud...
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akiskan/Ismail (34,744)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 6, 2013 7:20:04 PM CDT
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Dear Ismail, thats great shot. Diagonal composition works well. Sharpness and DOF are fine. Daylight a bit disturbed it. I am not fan of keeping spider web on the subject, i.e. branch but that can show how sharp is the image. TFS, Mehrdad
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Streets of Roros III
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pablominto/Pablo (303)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 6, 2013 12:23:52 PM CDT
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Composition is fine. Contrast is good and color spectrum is rich. Image is a bit over-sharpened. Better to clone out the bottom right corner curb. Cheers, Mehrdad
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Icicle on Railings
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pwhysall/Peter (216)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 6, 2013 12:21:57 PM CDT
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Very good shot dear Peter. DOF and sharpness on icicle are appropriate. I might only crop left side for 10-15%. Cheers, Mehrdad
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bluboy
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doug99/Doug (4,673)
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from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650)
on May 6, 2013 12:20:41 PM CDT
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Excellent job dear Doug. Great composition (diagonal), appropriate DOF and sharpness and good color and lighting. Almost flawless. Cheers, Mehrdad
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