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My dear, here comes the dinner!"
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reidulv/Reidulv (5,487)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)  
on April 14, 2013 1:26:42 PM CDT
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I am close to 2 thumbs,, just because I say wow.. wish I could be in a spot to photograph a sea eagle with a fish in its talons and mountains in the background, on my monitor it looks like you have enough detail, so seems that levels in PS sliding over the left slider over some,, treaking the light levels could add more punch and have the head show up better.
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Old cotton mill
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ecki/Ekhard (568)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 14, 2013 8:55:50 AM CDT
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yes, decaying structures are always subjects for the camera. so hard sometimes to find the right framing, I guess the trees are part of the story, but do clutter up the frame. a bit grainy, especially in the foreground. perhaps a product of the HDR work?
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Arch light
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illusion4d/Mohamed (2)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 11, 2013 9:13:22 AM CDT
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welcome to photosig, and interesting first post, nicely done, almost a bit tight in the framing on the bottom, I do like the way you captured the light and curves,, enjoy posting pictures and writing feedback for others on this photo critique site where part of the process is learning by writing feedback for others.
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Boatwreck
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bijan64/Bijan (10,858)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 11, 2013 9:10:49 AM CDT
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yes,, a bit tight in the crop, and the light must have been mid day overcast, could be better if the light had been kinder to you,, or a different time of day,, so... convert to BW,, and play with it further.
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Denim Sunset
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curlycam/Iain (234)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 11, 2013 9:09:38 AM CDT
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interesting, I think it is presented a bit too underexposed, and could benefit with a bit more lightening up,, add even more drama in the photo. nice.
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Sunrise behind the bridge
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dutchincle/Bas (786)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 10, 2013 8:49:05 PM CDT
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subtle,, and I like it,, I would take a dodge brush and lighten the water a bit on the right side of the falls, and maybe a bit of the front of the bidges, but not too much, would not want to upset the subtle nature of the light on the arches.. Europe?
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23
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chris1953/Chris (472)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 9, 2013 5:13:46 PM CDT
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yes, a bit too much pulling my eye trying to decide the primary subject, yes, I know the window, but the bushes on the bottom distract, and not sure if the old vines help either, and then there is the lamp which does not tie into the window overall due to placement, the location definitely has potential, and is worth future study.
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Butterfly VI
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jmrosz/Jan (205,961)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 8, 2013 10:14:38 AM CDT
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its really close, but, I do agree about lightening the background, but also, the focus point of the eyes are a near miss, so that the final image just can't meet the best potential.
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watching you
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doug99/Doug (4,881)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 8, 2013 9:33:38 AM CDT
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very interesting, you can tell you focused on the eyes, which was critical, the dof is so shallow that the top of the head closer to the film plane is soft in focus, almost brings it down 1 notch, but I lean toward the composition, and look of the photo.
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Tree
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cosiecki/Chris (2,162)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 5, 2013 10:30:11 PM CDT
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good tree for a subject study, give the subject a bit more breathing room next time, both edges are cutting off, and if possible, show up perhaps at sunrise,, also, would be awesome on a foggy morning, or even a rainy day.
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ME
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ahmadreza95/AhmadReza (167)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 5, 2013 8:10:31 PM CDT
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shouuld be interesting if you handed this to a psych class, muscle flex, ok, now try to look cool, hey,, photographer,, try to look pleasant, yeah,, its a snap, face looks just a hair less sharp,
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Balloon Heaven
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alegnaphotography/Angela (4)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 5, 2013 8:08:28 PM CDT
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welcome to photosig, looks like a cute photo, try posting the image a little large, on this one, you might try to lighten the exposure a bit more so that she is more visible. enjoy posting and writing critiques.
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Hope in your arms
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tzi/Hector (1,580)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 5, 2013 4:44:19 PM CDT
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it is a nice clear people moment, I do feel you squeezed the frame a bit, her hand being cut off, and a bit more space on top would have been nice. The colors are vibrant, and sure is a cute baby.
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Gliding By
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amedow/Alex (9,555)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 3, 2013 7:32:22 PM CDT
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Yes, I'll make it a trio and say well done, the eye is in a bit of the shadows. but nice details. and good capture.
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8975
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enizmon/Enrique (981)
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from stmv/Sebastian (60,073)
on April 2, 2013 1:57:02 PM CDT
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very very nice, and only thing keeping it from three is the lighting is a bit flat, and the background too, but wow, what a nice job capturing the water spout. bravo.
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