Imitation
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afshin1/Afshin (1,244)
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from seraf/Feres (202) 
on May 4, 2012 7:59:06 PM CDT
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Somehow it reminded me of magritte's painting, great colors and sharpness, as well as composition.
too bad the line is croocked but other than that the shot is great.
keep up the good work
regards.
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Amethyst #2
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valeriosan/Valerio (3,391)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on May 4, 2012 1:26:41 PM CDT
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good work, but in my opinion the details in the hair draws the eyes at first, as well as the upper gem that look as if edited in PS, but in all and for all i love the shot, keep up the good work
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ektachrome/Francesco (13,034)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on May 4, 2012 1:13:49 PM CDT
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I love the colors, the grain and the overall look, the angle is very interesting but i think the crop is either too tight or too loose, tight in the feel of boxing the model in the frame while the emotions and sensations expressed or portrayed should be more grand, i dunno if that made any sense, anyways good work
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panther7/Tom (262)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on May 4, 2012 1:10:34 PM CDT
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good effort and concept, could be better tho it took me a bit of time to realize exactly what i am looking at
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Rue 49
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aimeemerheb/Aimee (644)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on October 25, 2010 7:28:54 PM CDT
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good effort even tho i think a but more contrast would make it pop out a bit more.
but good shot :)
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her 2
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ralf1989/Ralf (40)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on May 21, 2010 7:26:05 PM CDT
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your key light is too strong for a soft light
as for your fill light need to be in a different direction since it casted the shadow of her hair onto her face instead of adding luminosity to the face and negating the hard shadow of the nose.
other than that the look of her face is kind of weird no expression and the leg as it was stated is a bit distracting but i can live with it.
great work keep it up
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carrion-crow
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infection/Nurlan (27)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 24, 2008 3:29:50 PM CDT
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the white on the nose is not working, as for the dagger out of focus, closing the aperture and adding back light would have kept the background a bit blurry and the dagger sharper. but that is in my own point of view.
in all i think it's a good photo but can be worked on much more.
thank you for sharing Feres.
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It`s time...
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jordache/Laurentiu (568)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 17, 2008 5:03:09 AM CDT
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i like the idea even tho the choice of composition doesn't work at all, the stairs are the main point in the photo as for the clock or the girl in the wedding dress are in relief, the clock is kinda cropped in the top section and the missing head is a bit disturbing. if the angle was a bit different and the composition craned up a bit showing both face and entire clock it would have been much better in my POV.
thank you for sharing.
Feres.
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Stars Fly
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marzbanplus/Mahdi (12)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 17, 2008 4:59:58 AM CDT
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love the feeling in this photo, but only if you could take a different angle, a bit wider, making the entire reflection show in the photo, as well as the top where the sparks goes out of frame, other than that i like it a lot!
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kokko/Carl (29)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 17, 2008 4:57:19 AM CDT
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simple sensual and the texture is great! great shot! even the grains in the photo work well.
thank you for sharing
Feres.
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Water-fun
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jmrosz/Jan (203,907)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 17, 2008 4:26:08 AM CDT
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IMPV this is a great photo, from composition to exposure!
the waves gives it a wild effect and the fact that the kids are naked add to it all giving it this wild nature of simple fun.
thank you for sharing i really love it.
Feres.
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lsiv/Lars (134)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on August 17, 2008 4:22:21 AM CDT
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I have to say i'm a big fan of corsets, i like what i am seeing but the composition is a bit tight, and you are missing some back light the model look as plastered to the background! that IMPV! other than that i love it :)
thank you for sharing
Feres.
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Inner Workings
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mvp/Mitch (622)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on June 18, 2008 10:11:17 PM CDT
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the composition is a bit tight to the edges, and here is an idea try and see how it would look like, turn it to black and white, and add a bit of contrast, with the subject you are shooting it will create a good effect. other than that i love the topic.
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Drums of War
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sierrak/Sierra (416)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on June 18, 2008 9:12:44 PM CDT
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personally i would have chosen a different angle and composition of the photo, taking the shot from the side way putting focus the drums(since it's called the drums of war) and opening the aperture putting the person next to the drummer in "relief".
but i love it as it is and i don't think the white is causing any problem in the shot, since there is not enough white in it.
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old one
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velvetfear/Tony (40)
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from seraf/Feres (202)
on March 28, 2007 7:36:52 PM CDT
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I have to say a lovely model :D it's a good photo,
love the blury background and the great sharpness
thank you for sharing
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