Elk
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benoah/Jen (1,223)
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from crusier/Will (683) 
on March 22, 2003 11:52:59 PM CST
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It would be nicer if the fence was not in the picture. It appears to be a wild majestic animal, but the fence gives it away that it is just a piece of livestock. Maybe a little more contrast would help also.
Will
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"Killing the Messenger, you Bitch"
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laszlo/Stephen (2,080)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 18, 2003 8:47:23 AM CST
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I like the surreal feeling of it is almost like you could imagine this picture. But at the same time I know that it is real situation. There maybe is a little much contrast for me but I think it works well here.
Will
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RNC7A
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chuckfuhrman/Chuck (1,327)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 17, 2003 9:58:07 PM CST
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Maybe add a little more color to everything but the roof. I am also with Bob here the sky does nothing for the pciture. Maybe black and white?
Will
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Construction #6: Explosion
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79514.v1/santi-jose (3,602)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 17, 2003 9:42:18 PM CST
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Good eye, maybe try a little more color though.
Will
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Evening
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harnod/Matej (596)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 14, 2003 11:22:26 PM CST
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Great composition, though it seems a little underexposed for me. The snow is such a grey color, I find it distracting. Though it is still very nice.
Will
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Branchville Barn
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lisawill/Lisa (1,044)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 10, 2003 7:28:50 PM CST
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I love the textures and pattern, although the tone does not do much for me that is just my own taste.
Will
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"Friday Afternoon..."
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kolja/Kolja (1,338)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 10, 2003 7:22:59 PM CST
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I like the feeling of depth and height of the buldings, though I am not sure about the subject it just does not seem to hold my intrest long. I think that whatever you did with p.s though it is right on the money, the contrast and sharpness are perfect.
Will
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The Entrance
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bruce1michigan/Bruce (2,960)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 2, 2003 10:38:48 PM CST
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Interesting though it does not seem very sharp though it may just be the nature of the subject. I think maybe show a little more of the wall and put the entrance further to the left would make things a little more dynamic. Just a thought.
Will
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vermont farm
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spphoto/Sheldon (3,549)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 2, 2003 10:32:45 PM CST
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It is a little cluttered for my taste, the weed on the left corner could go. I also think that maybe it needs a little bit of rotation, no a big deal I make that mistake all the time also.
Will
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Old Mill
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24108.v1/Shanley (960)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on March 2, 2003 10:27:10 PM CST
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I really like it, there is no one thing that really stands out from the rest of it. It just kind of goes together, though something about the tone does not really thrill me but that is a minor point.
Will
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Deformed Cedar Stump
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jeades1/Johnny (1,696)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on February 16, 2003 10:33:37 PM CST
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I think what this picture lacks is context of it's environment. The shape and the textures are great, but it is to general to be an abstraction and does not show what the area around it is like. I know that probably makes no sense, sorry about my communication short comings. If you could include the great textures and maybe some foreground and background I really think it would help.
Will
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Fortune Teller
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checco/Luciano (1,183)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on February 16, 2003 10:28:39 PM CST
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This is really nice, my only thought are that her hair is kind of a solid black mass,which it would probably be hard for that not to happen. It is not that big of a deal anyway.
Will
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Small Waterfall
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wmdyer/William (2,380)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on February 16, 2003 4:31:47 PM CST
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I think a little slower shutter speed and maybe a little more contrast in the falls and the wall around them might do the picture more justice. I do like the composition, I think it just needs a little p.s work.
Will
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My Two Best Friends
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tconnors/Terry (2,138)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on February 6, 2003 11:46:03 PM CST
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HMM there appears to be a horses ass right in the middle of your picture! And no I do not mean the gentleman. I think it would be better if the horse was maybe showing his better side, and maybe a little less or more d.o.f. My thoughts are that the background is just enough out of focus to be annoying but not enough to remove emphasis from it. I hope that made sense.
Will
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(Blocked)
73117.v1/See (931)
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from crusier/Will (683)
on February 6, 2003 11:39:50 PM CST
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I like every thing about this expect the (uumm how to say this nicely) puke green back ground. Sorry I just do not find it appealing. Though I do like the strong grain the conflicting angles and how some unimportant parts of the image are washed out. Definitely different and original.
Will
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