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Sandman's Return
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filemon/Wojciech (204)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on August 9, 2004 7:25:18 PM CDT
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GREAT Composition! lovely detail and depth of field, but I would like to see a likke detail in the eye, it appears completely black on my monitor. How about a bit of information on your subject?
Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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Just a Rose
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maree/Maree (38,253)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on August 9, 2004 7:09:48 PM CDT
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Beautiful lighting on this rose, great macro shot, lovely colour and definition. You could try it with less depth of field to give those outer petals a little softer focus.
Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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Camellos
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iea/Ivan (1,144)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on August 9, 2004 7:02:43 PM CDT
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Excellent colour and contrast, lovely composition and very interesting subject matter. Very good depth of firld.
Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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#37
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joyq/Rotem (5,184)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on August 9, 2004 6:57:56 PM CDT
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I think it needs to be a bit brighter. The darkness is distracting. The dark circle at the top right needs to be either complete or cloned out. A bit more wall on the right would balance it better. I'm not saying you should centre the door, just a tad more wall.
Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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Colours by Sunrise
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hanzip/Yoon-Tae (340)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 21, 2004 12:34:49 AM CDT
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why has noone commented on this very dramatic image, what's wrong with people?
The black frame sets it off well, great colour and clarity.
Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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51904
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CK/cyn (587)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 19, 2004 1:34:59 AM CDT
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nice warm and fuzzy image. I like the sepia tone, but it is a bit too grainy for my taste and I would prefer to see a bit more space on the edges. Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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S i n g l e
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sonchai/Sonchai (2,507)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 19, 2004 1:08:49 AM CDT
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STUNNING, GREAT BALANCE, CLARITY, COMPOSURE AND COLOUR. EXCELENT USE OF THE THIRDS RULE. SIMPLY INVITING. Please visit, my website. Regards, Susan Segal
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Two lips
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ve3cnu/Rick (1,484)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 10, 2004 9:22:38 PM CDT
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I like the idea you are attempting here. Great colour and contrast, nice tight crop but in my opinion a tad more depth of field would have brought more of the front flowers into focus and improved the overall effect. Please visit My website!. Regards, Susan Segal
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Lamp, Wall and Flower
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akiskan/Ismail (34,744)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 10, 2004 7:35:21 AM CDT
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Lovely colour and composition, the contrast is very dramatic, but I feel the flowers could be a bit sharper. A bit more depth of field might help. Regards, Susan Segal
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Spider
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bar10der/Banir (1,655)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on May 6, 2004 2:10:55 AM CDT
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nice of him ot pose for you. I like the composition, nice simple frame, well balanced. Did you use a flash because there appears to be a lot of light on his back.
Please visit my website Regards, Susan Segal
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General Store PC
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dtc1/Jim (633)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on April 19, 2004 8:27:58 PM CDT
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Great colour and contrast, love the snow, but the image is leaning to the right, perhaps some perspective alteration in Photoshop would help.
Regards, Susan Segal
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In a Row
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brenland/Brenda (1,011)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on April 19, 2004 8:02:32 PM CDT
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I love the monochrome effect and the balance is good too, nice simple frame, nice clarity and composition, but I think the crumpled back ground needs ironing.
Regards, Susan Segal
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[Experimental] Bi-Polarized Light
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cato/Michele (1,727)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on April 13, 2004 6:02:47 PM CDT
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interesting work of art, I have no idea what it is but I'm sure when you tell us it will be absolutley obvious. Great colour effect.
Regards, Susan Segal
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Wild fruits
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pookpui/Roongkan (2,948)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on April 12, 2004 12:04:01 AM CDT
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Stunning! Lovely contrast between the red berries and the soft green leaves, very well proportioned and a nice simple frame. My only critisism is the blurry little patch in the bottom left corner on the leaf. Regards, Susan Segal
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Macro
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cddm66/Davide (1,245)
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from segal/Susan (10,669)
on April 11, 2004 11:59:20 PM CDT
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Lovely image, great contrast and perfect depth of field. The frame works perfectly with this type of image. The dew drops on the petals add a lovely touch. For some reason, they are not letting me give it three TU, but it is worth it. Regards, Susan Segal
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