Racheli
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amnon73/Amnon (4,251)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324) 
on May 24, 2013 3:20:49 PM CDT
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Hi Amnon,
It is a very nice photo. Interesting angle and a very well deal of light. You framed the model very good. Also the use with external light help to bring the background in a good light not in overexposure even the model is in shadow.
Regards
Ziv
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Falaynaz
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dena1/Dena (43,684)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 23, 2013 5:26:00 AM CDT
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It is an amazing photo with full of Emotion. Great details. I would like to see it with more details on the right side of the face and without the branch behind the face.
Overall it is a marvelous photo.
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Steffie V
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jmrosz/Jan (204,263)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 22, 2013 10:31:10 AM CDT
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That is a simplify photo and that is the strong of it. Lovely girl with a bit of smile and nice position. very good background that isolated and emphasize her
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Natty Spasova
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amnon73/Amnon (4,251)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 18, 2013 8:24:51 AM CDT
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Hi Amnon,
cute picture of lovely model.
the background trees add much to the atmosphere and highlights the contrast between the delicate model and the rough trees.
Cheers Ziv
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rondasue/Scott (2,352)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 14, 2013 12:33:12 AM CDT
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it would beter to g×ve more space in the bottom, now her nipples are not in and not out. in that situation I think that it will beter if you crop a bit in the bottom. may be you can leave a bit of the crown for some teasing.
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Mother and son
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portemr/Rosario (13,072)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 13, 2013 12:14:44 AM CDT
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It is a beautiful photo of mother and a sun. I like the expression of both of them also the b&w is fine there.
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durr3/Durr (340)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on May 12, 2013 1:37:39 AM CDT
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In my opinion that photo has a very good elements and all together made here a marvelous photo. the elements that I like here are the black and white that gave an old photo mood, the lipstick that she put and send our eyes to her beautiful lips and of course the generous Cleavage that show the black mysterious line.
It is a very good job that did not get the proper rating.
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thehox/Haitham (1,096)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on April 28, 2013 2:42:31 AM CDT
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It is a very strong portrait. You succeed to transfer her feeling and mood. The black and white tones are great to such photo. It is an amazing photo.
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Before the wedding
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amnon73/Amnon (4,251)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on April 13, 2013 1:19:09 AM CDT
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Hi Amnon,
It is an amazing portrait of a beautiful model with a special hat that gave her a good frame. I like the eyes contact with the camera. DOF is perfect and helping to emphasize the lady face.
Ziv
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Man and dog
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tornaci/Safak (560)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 23, 2013 1:30:53 AM CDT
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it is an amazing photo with great mystical mood. I like that as it is now, also maybe a bit movement to the right may improuve it, to give up the of the subject in the left and give a bit more room at the right
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bubbles
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tornaci/Safak (560)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 20, 2013 1:23:18 AM CDT
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It is a beautiful photo. I so like the happiness and the colorful girl against the Gloomy view. For improving you have to align a little the horizon line and reduce the noise that was case by high iso or bad camera also the white item above/behind here head is a little disturbing me.
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Outside kitchen
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jmrosz/Jan (204,263)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 17, 2013 8:35:12 AM CDT
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Hi Jan,
It is a very authentic picture, you got her in action in her real life.
Usually I saw a very good portrait in your submission, here I like to see more than just portrait.
It is a very good one.
Regards
Ziv
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Posing for portrait
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jmrosz/Jan (204,263)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 12, 2013 1:54:43 AM CDT
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Hi Jan,
It is a very strong portrait of strong bird. The position and the DOF are great.
There is a little problem with the light, you took it in hard light and got some burnt area above is beak and a bit dark place above his eye.
His position makes it.
Ziv
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Playing on the seashore.
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portemr/Rosario (13,072)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 12, 2013 1:35:55 AM CDT
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It is a beautiful scene with great warm light. I would like to see the children more closely and sharper also the horizon seems to be a bit tilt, overall it is a very good one.
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rondasue/Scott (2,352)
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from zarzar/Zar (7,324)
on March 11, 2013 7:24:37 AM CDT
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It is a very good work. I like your model as she looks so natural, the light that come from the side is emphasize her beautiful body line. Maybe some space above her may improve. overall it is a very good and refreshing one.
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