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Bottom of the Falls (4) This item is new
richardlgreene/Richard (622)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on September 2, 2014 12:55:49 AM CDT (4) Early critique This item is new

Pleasant scene with a good layout of the waterfall and good 'water in motion' effect; maybe a slightly wider crop, to include more of the stream at the bottom, with an ever so tiny downward move of the camera (leave out half an inch on top) ?

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The little Wire Lady with her shopping bag (6) This item is new
fz8/Adam (9,600)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 11:53:33 PM CDT (6) Early critique This item is new

Well spotted and adequately photographed; a nice abstract quality to this scene well framed and exposed. The post-processing is sober and doesn't distract from the subject.

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Skogafoss (7) This item is new
brunok/Bruno (1,073)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 1:06:23 PM CDT (4) Early critique This item is new

Black and white is not a bad choice for that waterfall; the blurred water is quite convincing, and its rocky environment very picturesque. Taking one or two steps to the right would have helped I think, as the bottom of the cascade would then be entirely visible (instead of partly hidden by the rocks). And the whole picture could do with a bit more contrast.

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Cime Bianche Valley - Italy (2) This item is new
lucafilippi/Filippi (1,278)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 11:57:22 AM CDT (1) Early critique This item is new

A beautiful landscape, very majestic, under an attractive lighting; composition is OK , but had the picture been taken from a slightly higher viewpoint you wouldn't have those treetops superimposed with the base of the houses.

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spiric/Sergey (8)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 11:53:06 AM CDT (11) Early critique This item is new

Quite a provocative shot as the two models are in sharp contrast with each other, as well as in contrast with the usual nude pictures one will see everywhere. This is enhanced by a very acute light, and there appears to be sharpening to convey the message even further. The background, too, is very unconventional ... as is the movement of the models. In addition to that, there seems to be a complicity between the girls, which leads one to think that they are in complete...

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night shot (7) This item is new
alkaabi/Abdul (544)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 11:46:14 AM CDT (4) Early critique This item is new

Your exposure is good and the colours are attractive; the composition is rather dynamic, and the opposition cold/warm in the colours is very pleasant. Sharpness could be a tad better though, and I find the blurred silhouettes of visitors a bit distracting.

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oevt/Oscar (35,363)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2014 12:26:26 AM CDT (3) Early critique This item is new

Nice pose and expression, good framing; there's a bit too much light on her back ... And I find the picture to be too much on the red side.

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Looking Forward... Looking Backwards... (11)
mariag/Maria (1,380)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 22, 2014 11:56:12 PM CDT (5) Early critique

A moment well seized with all the people engaging with each other or themselves, with the exception of the little boy whose gaze establishes a link with the viewer. Thus we don't feel too much like peeping Toms ... two minor flaws : the toy truck whose front has been cut off, and the low viewpoint that has left in a truncated skyline : either show more (it will help confirm location,which the picture does not really need, the clothes are sufficient ...) or don't show it at...

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Pearson Falls (4)
richardlgreene/Richard (622)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 22, 2014 11:50:39 PM CDT (2) Early critique

Dynamic composition but I think a wider crop would have been more appropriate as it would have included more of the water running out of frame at bottom. Also I get the impression that the picture leans to the right.

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45 angle (4)
fz8/Adam (9,600)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 22, 2014 2:54:44 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Well spotted and composed, however the horizontal lines are not strictly so; and all these dirt spots are an eyesore. Of course they are part of the subject ... still they distract from the purity of the original subject.

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Embalse del Conde de Guadalhorce (6)
iourib/Iouri (1,278)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 20, 2014 11:26:04 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Remarkable landscape with nice colours; three tiers that do not compete with each other but complement each other, the trees, the lake, the distant mountain range. Even a lone figure to add a sense of scale ! All the technicalities are there ...

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Water Eagle (5)
yellowgrey/Barbro (16,824)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 20, 2014 2:42:40 AM CDT (3) Early critique

Well seized ... it is indeed quite evocative of an eagle. Now to make this more obvious, some post-producing seems to be in order, like sharpening the beak, adding some contrast in it, and brightening further the bright parts of the background. Converting the shot into B&W might be worth a try.

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The sun is gone (7)
jmrosz/Jan (226,241)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 20, 2014 12:59:36 AM CDT (8) Early critique

A lovely moody shot, with basically only one colour; I like the movement in the water, but maybe the picture would benefit from leaving in just the buoy in the distance (get rid of the poles at each end ?)

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Rocks and the Sea (3)
jenkins/Jorge (4,708)
Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 20, 2014 12:20:41 AM CDT (1) Early critique

An attractive seascape that on the whole has been well dealt with; however, the dark bits could have a bit more detail in them, and it's a pity we don't get more glow in the reflections in the puddle in the very foreground (bottom right).

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St Marco's Square (12)
pfranklin/Paul (556)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jaypix/Jean-Pierre (32,934) Send mail to this user on August 20, 2014 12:17:22 AM CDT (6) Early critique

Excellent framing, good exposure and very attractive B&W tones; the reflections add depth to the picture, but I am not sure about the movement of the clouds in the sky, they are distracting as they are in contrast with the buildings, both in shape and sharpness.

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