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Brothers..... (9)
andras/Andras (1,656)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on December 11, 2004 9:49:28 PM CST (0)

If I remember correctly to avoid the problem of the perspective you should rotate the camera keeping the lens always in the same position. To do so you'll need to move the all tripod so that the lens will end-up always in the same position (I don't know if I made myself clear as I would not understand it!). Besides that... great party! -Regards-

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Blue (11)
elefedefe/Ll (1,210)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on December 11, 2004 9:11:20 PM CST (1)

2-1/2 TU... Lovely composition looks like you are lost in the sky. The only hitch I see is that the pole is in an awkward position... not in the center and not on the side. I would try with a square format and the subject perfectly centered -Regards-

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green is the hope (30)
andie/Andreas (458)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on November 25, 2004 2:27:15 AM CST (6)

Lovely composition and eventually I would show them all as a single photo as they are very interesting and colourful. It would be fantistic to have one person siting on one chair ( eventually you if shooting with the timer or a remote :-) Regards

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andrebrito/André (1,861)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on October 29, 2004 11:37:32 AM CDT (3) Early critique

Andre`, a beautiful and tasteful image. Mostly I shoot B/W film from 35 to large and I don't see here any cold "colours". She is beautifully aligned with the rock and in the perfect position of the frame, the light is perfect to me so 3TU, no doubts. Regards.

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'Roll out the barrel........lah.lah.lah' (7)
thegaff/Steve (26,651)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on October 15, 2004 12:04:48 PM CDT (1) Early critique

2++ TU. First this is a photo of my country therefore, I am in love with it :) I am sure that you have cropped the flowers because there was a door that you did not want to show but this does not bother me. The only think that I don't like in the composition (but here there is nothing that you can do about it unless you use PS) is the plastic tube in the centre of the image. These are the thinks that I hate in Italy, we have old and wonderful villages that we ruin with...

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sporto/Gord (4,260)
Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on October 2, 2004 7:54:19 PM CDT (0) Early critique

Overall is a good image. I agree that the shadow on her face can be distracting, especially because her smile is lost. Something else I find more distracting is the blur of her skin, mostly of her hands. I don’t understand if this is an effect done on PS or with a filter on the lens, however if it was done on PS can be easily fixed (I find it a little too accentuated). Regards.

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Me & My Shadow (10)
maree/Maree (38,253)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on May 21, 2004 11:27:35 AM CDT (2) Early critique

I do agree 100% with Marion but I think you have a good photo for a 2TU. To me the background would be okay if the flower was laying down on it, as it is showed here is distracting. Very nice portfolio of flowers and there is always something new to discover and to photograph. Regards.

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kirinawa/Lochai (1,844)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on May 3, 2004 11:21:16 PM CDT (3) Early critique

3TU for something that is always difficult to deal with... human body. We always see straight photos of front or back genitals that at the end are boring and all the same, maybe from a different angle of a different body but... all the same. I like the choice of ISO 3200 that gives an idea of surreal and I like the choice of the red and black shirt with the red and black stocking and the black background. Regards.

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A Story (4)
lemonkey/Johngwon (94)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on May 1, 2004 10:16:24 PM CDT (1) Early critique

Love the simplicity. I don't know if you did crop vertically or horizontally. The square format works fine. I wonder if a panorama format, cropping the railway, would make the image more "romantic". I also like all your other photos. Regards.

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Twisted run (4)
alkapone/Mikko (1,039)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 28, 2004 11:06:09 PM CST (0) Early critique

You have a very good eye. This photo is very interesting but too busy or incomplete (for my personal taste). In the first case (too busy) I would prefer to cut the woman on the bottom whose running. In the second case (incomplete) I would have included the full figure of the woman running and have the man balancing the image on the other side. If I can give you a suggestion, especially when shooting in digital, I would include more of the surrounding scene as you will be...

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Stages (1)
hjreif99/Jorg (3,630)
Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 14, 2004 12:18:25 AM CST (0) Early critique

The image looks too flat. The composition itself could work but the light is not giving justice to the flowers. Probably shooting it again with the sun will give you a much more beautiful photo like your "California Buttercup".

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Gray Tulip (9)
brenland/Brenda (1,011)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 6, 2004 8:13:37 PM CST (2) Early critique

There is not that much to say except that it's a very nice composition. Probably not a new subject but still beautiful. Although it was shot in digital the grey tones are perfect.

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Quiet (28)
karlf/Karl (1,689)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 6, 2004 8:09:58 PM CST (5)

A great photo does not need to be perfectly sharp or correctly focused. This portrait is beautiful like this because it’s soft and she looks very innocent.

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Thinking of her (6)
alkapone/Mikko (1,039)
Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 6, 2004 7:59:48 PM CST (0) Early critique

I love this "very simple" composition. I've the same problem with the fact that the frame is too far from the subject. However (as I'm more from the old school) instead of cut and past with PS I would prefer to re-shoot with the subject standing-up closer to the frame. -Raphael-

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Silver Flyer v2 (9)
donpeach/Don (2,219)
Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lombardo/Raphael (568) Send mail to this user on March 6, 2004 7:52:43 PM CST (2) Early critique

I don't find any reason to give a 2TU. Powerful color and very nice contrast with the silver element that reflects the blue of the sky.

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