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from pandaportraits/Caroline (20,905) 
on October 28, 2004 8:47:19 PM CDT
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I really do like this shot. I think the color is great. But there are two flaws that keep it from being perfect. One, it lacks clarity, two... as you already know, to much grass in front. Otherwise, very nice shot. Regards, Caroline
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from claudiu/Claudiu (17,886)
on September 28, 2004 7:54:35 PM CDT
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I think you should frame different, landscape. If your focale wasn't enough for a closer look, I think you should use the surroundings to create a different kind of shot. The back of the baby lama and the head of his mother were overexposed. Picture has a slight cyanish cast, but this isn't important, you can edit anytime. However, judging by your camera is a nice capture.
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from blandsman/Bennett (8,243)
on September 1, 2004 3:21:46 PM CDT
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You have the makings of a good photograph. The cropping has to be tighter so your main objects are in the foreground, not the background of the picture. The focus could be a little tighter as well. You might want to increase the contrast on the animals. Keep trying.
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from breekijzer/Luc (4)
on April 12, 2004 5:02:04 AM CDT
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colours are good, but here stops the positive part.
composition is bad. Too much grass in the front.
Doesn't look like two wild lama's, rather two animals
catched and emprisoned in the back of someones garden.
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from texascruiser/Laura Spell Aka (13,815)
on June 2, 2003 8:25:40 PM CDT
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Good colors and lighting. Details are good. I would suspect that these are mother and child? The pose is good, would have been better if you could have gotten closer to the animals for the shot. The lone tree trunk in the left background is a bit distracting, I might try to clone that out. Keep on clicking!
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