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from paololasala/Paolo (662) 
on November 14, 2002 8:02:54 PM CST
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Molto bella, ciao.
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from 479.v1/******************** (159)
on August 6, 2002 9:32:18 PM CDT
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I'm enjoying the negative space on the left. My mind wants to see a little more of her from top to bottom though...a little higher on her belly, a little lower on her leg. But all in all, great composition.
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from achman/Brian (1,971)
on June 14, 2002 10:10:20 AM CDT
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I like it a lot...I would agree that you can crop a touch on the left side, but not much..I also like the model leaning, as it creates tension in an otherwise calm and subdued photo.
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from superkev/Kevin (4,199)
on June 14, 2002 9:07:30 AM CDT
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Good use of light and shadow to create composition. I feel a bit uncomfortable with the very slight angle created by the model leaning forward in the frame. I'd like to see it more vertical, or more diagonal. This is only slightly off vertical. Great exposure!
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from mbighin/Mauro (9,561)
on June 9, 2002 4:50:17 PM CDT
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PErfect
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from 4282.v1/Doug (408)
on June 9, 2002 3:09:47 PM CDT
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Good use of darkness on the left side to provide a sense of isolation. If the right left had been bent just a bit, to break up the parallel nature of the lines, it would have mde it more dynamis and made it three thumbs
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from gnello/Agnelli (1,099)
on June 9, 2002 1:08:51 PM CDT
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good, but you can cut the left part of photo
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