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flower 01

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Title     flower 01
Photographer     jonathanguan/Jonathan (11,385) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     FLOWER
Categories     Fine Art
Nature
Snapshot
Lens     Tamron 28-300mm AF Zoom
Camera     Pentax Z1-P
Format     35mm
Film     Fuji Superia ISO 200
Submitted     October 18, 2002 12:11:23 AM CDT
Views     99
Rating     10 Thumb-up

If you ahve time , please criticize my works , thank you

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mauritta/Mauritta (1,089) Send mail to this user on January 8, 2003 10:38:34 PM CST (0)

Beautiful, colorful macro

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Thumb-up    from photalex/Alexandre (200) Send mail to this user on December 30, 2002 4:59:39 AM CST (1)

Pour la forme de la fleur.

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Thumb-up    from yyee/Yee (119) Send mail to this user on November 18, 2002 8:21:24 AM CST (1)

bright, soft

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from rboesl/Robert (1,953) Send mail to this user on October 24, 2002 2:38:11 PM CDT (1)

Image subject needs sharper focus. Also need to tighten the depth of field so the background becomes blurred and is not such a distraction.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from 4361.v1/Will (6,193) Send mail to this user on October 19, 2002 11:24:19 PM CDT (1)

The flower is composed nicely and fills the frame nicely. I also think, as others have mentioned, that it lacks some sharpness. I'm going to take a guess judging from the shutter speed and the assumption that this is a handheld capture, that the softness in part is from motion blur caused by camera shake. Try using a faster shutter speed or a tripod if there is little wind. Downsizing for the web may have added to the softness and some USM would help at that point.

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Thumb-up    from grandpafrank/Frank (1,248) Send mail to this user on October 18, 2002 4:12:57 PM CDT (1)

Nice shot by way too soft.

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Thumb-up    from pajara/Paj (10,507) Send mail to this user on October 18, 2002 12:44:25 AM CDT (1)

Nice colour but the flower is too central and the focus is too soft.
Would you like to criticize some of mine

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