Misty morning


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Title     Misty morning
Photographer     ssal/Alex (35,117) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     My pictures
Categories     Emotive
Landscape
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 14, 2012 10:19:54 PM CST
Views     244
Rating     3 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from mikewebb/Mike (18,724) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on December 15, 2012 1:45:03 AM CST (1) Early critique

What needs to be sharp is beautifully sharp and I like the main tree coming from the left edge, it looks really good. It's that small piece of branch on the right that bothers me, it looks a bit random but if you took it out then I fear all the water and attention might drain out of the right edge. I do find it draws attention to itself. That bright bit by the boat - a window? Does cloning that out improve things?

Mike

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Thumb-up    from edwin/Edwin K.W. (234,537) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 10:35:49 PM CST (3) Early critique

I tend to agree with Nicholas on the reflection of the branches, I think your presentation would become stronger if you crop that part off so as to reduce the cluttered element at the bottom side.

Cheers...........Edwin

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Thumb-up    from npaoni/Nicholas (23,525) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 10:26:37 PM CST (4) Early critique

For me this is one of those scenes with a lot of potential, but the shot falls a little short. The issue for me is that the boat and the trees in the background hold the interest, but so much of the frame is devoted to the branches. IMO the impact would increase if you cropped out the reflection and presented it more in landscape format. Nick

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From dave45/Dave (557) Send mail to this user on December 28, 2012 5:20:42 PM CST

I agree.

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