The shores of Lake Michigan


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Title     The shores of Lake Michigan
Photographer     alaskanhamlin/Rick (694) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Landscape
F-stop     f/11
Shutter speed     1/1000 sec
Categories     Abstract
Landscape
Sea and Sand
Lens     Nikkor 18-200 at 75mm
Camera     Nikon D7000
Format     "ISO 100"
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 14, 2012 8:58:28 PM CST
Views     261
Rating     3 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from edwin/Edwin K.W. (234,618) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 10:45:26 PM CST (2) Early critique

Your composition looks pretty strong but can be stronger if the photo is of portrait(vertical) composition, it would also be enhanced further if the curve at the left is not broken and falls out of the frame. The bright line alone the conjunction of the sand and water looks fine but the foam is too bright and overpowering.

Cheers.............Edwin

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Thumb-up    from npaoni/Nicholas (23,368) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 10:10:01 PM CST (2) Early critique

I really like the different textures in this image. The color combination is also pleasing. The lighting effect is good except for the foam, which IMO looks too bright. Perhaps some selective darkening would help and increase the impact. Nick

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Thumb-up    from jammer79/Radim (11,300) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 9:36:11 PM CST (2) Early critique

Not a bad try with this one. I like the shooting angle and curves in this one. Though I think the lightning is bit too harsh and also I would have liked to see the whole curved line on the left side. The crop is just too tight. Cheers, R.

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From log/Louise (27,880) Send mail to this user on December 15, 2012 4:17:38 AM CST

does the beach really slope that steeply?

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From alaskanhamlin/Rick (694) Send mail to this user on December 15, 2012 7:44:54 AM CST

Louis, the beach does not slope as much as this perspective shows. I took several photos of these lines, the beach, the silver edge of where the receding water meets the beach and the line of foam because I liked the way those lines led off into the distance. I ended up cropping it closer than I should have as I see now that I broke one of those lines, the silver, on the far left, which does leave this lacking. I appreciate all the comments and critiques and I am going to revisit the editing on this one as all of the critiques are very helpful.

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