Shadowy Triplet


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Title     Shadowy Triplet
Photographer     yamen/Yamen (450) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Instants
F-stop     f/4
Shutter speed     1/1000 sec
Categories     Decisive Moment
Black and White
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 14, 2012 3:00:16 PM CST
Views     234
Rating     4 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from leob5058/Leo (1,359) Send mail to this user on December 15, 2012 5:23:37 PM CST (0)

Very graphical and striking. My first move was to rate as 2 TU. However, the very good idea has not been executed to its full potential - the image composition is weak and not complete. The three poles are not enough to balance white space, Cropping (left&top) may help. I would also like to see more space behind the figures. Leo

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Thumb-up    from dickm865/Richard (2,853) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 6:07:44 PM CST (2) Early critique

I see the 3rd person. The idea here is good but the moment is not decisive. It would be succesful if the fishermen were separated and if their poles were completed in the composition. The silhouette is well done.

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Thumb-up    from ssal/Alex (37,183) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 5:22:46 PM CST (1) Early critique

This looks more a graphic art than a photo. I can't really make out whether those lines are fishing poles or cables. There are three lines, but I see only two persons. I think either you have one, where all three lines converge, or all three of them.

Sorry, it is a very confusing image to me.

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Thumb-up    from magnatti/Carlo (6,555) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 3:05:51 PM CST (2) Early critique

Nice and original black and white silhouette. More space on the right would had gave more balance to spaces. Well done, regards, Carlo.

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