Augusta River Walk on a Foggy Morning


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Title     Augusta River Walk on a Foggy Morning
Photographer     richardgreene/Richard (4,158) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portfolio
F-stop     f/16
Shutter speed     1/30 sec
Categories     Landscape
Weather
Travel
Lens     Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Camera     Canon T3i
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     December 14, 2012 12:41:28 PM CST
Views     302
Rating     4 Thumb-up

Another shot of the river walk in Augusta, GA.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from lamarnix/Lamar (44,786) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 6:27:29 PM CST (1) Early critique

The fog lends its usual moodiness to the scene. The red bricks seem to brighten things up. And the pathway into the distance does take charge of the composition; but does it with some interference from the heavy elements on the left side. It seems to me you are better off starting the composition about six feet further down the path.

Best wishes, Lamar

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From richardgreene/Richard (4,158) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 6:42:55 PM CST

Thank you, Lamar.

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Thumb-up    from ssal/Alex (34,997) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 6:04:01 PM CST (2) Early critique

Foggy scene is a challenge. While the fog covers up the clutter, it also is very bland.

It would be nice to have a person, or a couple walking in to out in the vanishing point. I would also burn the top and the bottom a little so it is not that bland.

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From richardgreene/Richard (4,158) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 6:42:27 PM CST

A person or couple would have been nice. But not a soul was out on that cool damp morning.

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From ssal/Alex (34,997) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 7:28:04 PM CST

If you're not a purist, you can always superimpose one.

For the fun of it, I actual did a quick and dirt one. I will delete it in a couple of days.

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Thumb-up    from joehearst/Joseph (804) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 1:13:59 PM CST (3) Early critique

I really enjoy seeing the colorful walk run into the fog, and the way it is curved makes it unnecessary to have a figure or something. I do not like the bright sky on the left, and suggest that you crop the image between the two pillars on the left.

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From richardgreene/Richard (4,158) Send mail to this user on December 14, 2012 2:23:32 PM CST

Thank you Joseph. But that's NOT a bright sky.....it's fog. Which is a part of what I was emphasizing in the shot.

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