Critiques
This photo currently has 3 conforming critiques.
Since there are already at least three conforming critiques, if you write a conforming critique for this photo, then you will receive only the usual one critique point every time another user rates your critique helpful.
Write a critique
If you find one of these critiques especially helpful--or especially unhelpful--then please take a moment to register your opinion by clicking one of the buttons to the right of the critique.
|
|
from digipixelite/Vishu (188) 
on October 22, 2012 1:28:41 PM CDT
(2)
Hi W, the pic attracts at first glance congrats!, and continues to hold your attention.. so far so good. However, one cannot help commenting on the potential of the photo which has all the features for a fantastic sunset; if you'd worked on the frame, like eliminate that dense dark shapeless object in the foreground (contours are what make silhouttes) perhaps we'd have gotten a sharper silhoutte of the reeds, birds against the highlights of the different hues of sunset ? happy clicking, digipixelite.
Reply
Show ratings
|
 |
|
| | |
|
|
|
from willmadd/William (213)
on October 15, 2012 4:08:18 PM CDT
(2)
While i really like the colours here (I have a thing for sun set photography), i think the silhouettes don't stan out enough. the centre seagulls do not stand out immediately and take a bit of finding. I was also completely unaware of the flying seagull to the right until I read the other critique. While I think the potential was there, I think the foreground needs a bit of work to create a stunning photograph.
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
|
from manuzzio/Gabriela (373)
on October 15, 2012 2:16:26 PM CDT
(2)
Hello W! The sky realy looks dramatic. I like this moment of sunset. It's evident that your attention and focus was at the sunset. Regarding the birds, I think you have too much silhouettes that merges with each other and the result is too much black spots without details. Yet you have a seagull in flight in the right of the photo that looks good. Thanks for sharing.
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
from maharudra86/Maharudra (177)
on October 15, 2012 2:10:46 PM CDT
Beautiful... nice one... Eye soothing photography...
Reply
|
|
|
Comments
Comments are different from critiques. Comments carry no rating, you may write more than one comment per photo, and you may comment on your own photos. If you want to rate this photo, then you should write a critique instead.
Add a comment
There are no comments on this photo.
Return to photos
|
