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from lalvaz/Lalit (52) 
on September 20, 2012 4:42:41 AM CDT
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Great snap, slightly overexposed perhaps. Like the background, but could improve on the cropping, In a full profile pic,such as this, you might want to keep some gap between the subject and the edges.
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from lurchi/Ulrich (61,244) 
on September 11, 2012 6:29:09 AM CDT
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Your model's pose and expression are nice and lovely, but additionally to what others have mentioned I feel the overall image and especially the woman are suffering from overexposure. I would also slightly rotate the image counter-clockwise to avoid the impression of instability coming from the columns leaning to the right.
Regards, U.
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From linderbrock/Otto (164)
on September 11, 2012 10:46:59 AM CDT
Thank you. About the exposure you are right, but I don't find it unstable yet.
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from khmueller/K.H. (11,127)
on September 11, 2012 12:14:40 AM CDT
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nice photo: pretty model with great smile, sunlight from left above...I guess you had some kind of fill light for the shadows, so they are not too harsh, for me you croped it too tight...especially above her head...Klaus
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From linderbrock/Otto (164)
on September 11, 2012 12:22:44 AM CDT
thank you for your comment. I did not have any fill light, just natural sun. :)
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from mryong/Preecha (405)
on September 11, 2012 12:12:55 AM CDT
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good work , lighting is just nice , cropping also fine to me. Model posture look natural. I like her smile a lot. one thing that could be improved may be the shadow are of her hair. it look too dark in shadow and no details. overall good work. I enjoy looking at it. thanks for sharing , Cheer - Yong
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From linderbrock/Otto (164)
on September 11, 2012 12:24:35 AM CDT
Thank you Yong, Nice comment, I enjoy the picture too.
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from michal235/Michal (123,253)
on September 11, 2012 12:09:30 AM CDT
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Nice and natural expression on face. Good eyes contact. Good portrait work. However your model's right hand's fingers are situated very close to the left frame, beside there are some white and grey areas out of the focus which are situated on the right side of photo. In my opinion make one step back and rotate camera a little to the left could help here. Generally in my opinion there is a need more space on the left side of photo. Regards, Michal.
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From chasr/Chas (0)
on September 11, 2012 8:26:37 PM CDT
No one mentioned the black boots,,dark hair,,light colors between the two,,how your eyes flicker back and forth,,of coarse one could pick it apart,,but for me not being a pro and a generation from 1939 I've seen my share of photos and have taken a few,,it reminds me of a bashful smile and the figure lines are right on,,well worth several looks wondering what she's thinking,,
Chas
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