Main
Photos
Articles
Reviews
Forums
Users
mySIG
Photos  Photo Critiques  Submit Photo  New Date  Search  Help 
Sign In

End of a pier

You are viewing a reduced-resolution thumbnail. You must have an account and be signed in to view photos greater than 72 hours old.

Photo

Title     End of a pier
Photographer     dutchincle/Bas (771) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     B & W
F-stop     f/22
Shutter speed     15 sec
Categories     Black and White
2012 - year
Lens     EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS II
Camera     Canon EOS Rebel T3i
Format     Raw ISO 100
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     June 3, 2012 9:03:59 AM CDT
Views     343
Rating     5 Thumb-up

C & C Welcome

Critiques

This photo currently has 4 conforming critiques. Since there are already at least three conforming critiques, if you write a conforming critique for this photo, then you will receive only the usual one critique point every time another user rates your critique helpful.

Write a critique

If you find one of these critiques especially helpful--or especially unhelpful--then please take a moment to register your opinion by clicking one of the buttons to the right of the critique.

Show newest first    Show most helpful first
Show oldest first    Show least helpful first

Thumb-up    from railhead/Mike (14,662) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 6:36:02 PM CDT (3)

you should really make this a vertical shot. crop in a bit from the left, and a lot from the right, then crop the entire dock area off the bottom, then it will frame the four supports in a diagonal formation in your vertical shot.

Reply  Show ratings 

Thumb-up    from milena11/Milena (4,874) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 9:35:21 AM CDT (6) Early critique

I agree, I would have included more pier, and most of all I would have chosen a "portrait" framing. Thanks for sharing. Ciao Milena

Reply  Show ratings 

From dutchincle/Bas (771) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 12:44:29 PM CDT

Thanks Milena..

Reply 

Thumb-up    from baba/David (38,576) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 9:24:06 AM CDT (6) Early critique

I think you have kind of left us in transition. The amount of the pier in this composition appears to be more an afterthought than a true contributor to the photo. I would suggest more pier at the bottom to really provide a stronger foundation to the photo. The black and white tonality is very nice.

Reply  Show ratings 

From dutchincle/Bas (771) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 9:26:20 AM CDT

Thanks David.. I was going to crop the wood of, but I liked the texture.. ButI do agree with your statements. Thanks Bas

Reply 

Thumb-up Thumb-up    from afshin1/Afshin (1,244) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 9:18:31 AM CDT (5) Early critique

Nice Idea Bas-But I suggest you crop the bottom and some of the right.When we don't see the wooden part of downside ,we can travel in imagination-but when we see it travel would be finished!You are a brave photographer.Good luck.

Reply  Show ratings 

From dutchincle/Bas (771) Send mail to this user on June 3, 2012 9:27:03 AM CDT

I agree, I will crop of and repost. Thanks Bas

Reply 

Comments

Comments are different from critiques. Comments carry no rating, you may write more than one comment per photo, and you may comment on your own photos. If you want to rate this photo, then you should write a critique instead.

Add a comment

There are no comments on this photo.

Return to photos