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from purplerose/Jerrica (2,683) 
on June 3, 2012 1:35:13 AM CDT
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Lovely colors. Feels a bit blurry to me. Seems like it's a zoomed crop of a larger photo, but some sharpening may be able to sharpen at least the bird.
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from mccook36/Merv (3,682)
on June 1, 2012 7:56:08 PM CDT
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I like it, Rosario. I might clone out the hottest spots on the sun and try to lighten the water somewhat. I like the composition very much.
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from tokugawa/Pedro (708)
on June 1, 2012 7:17:50 PM CDT
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This photo seems OOF. Is it me, or maybe camera shake? I think the square composition would work better if you could see a bit more of the sea. I also find the position of the bird disturbing - more to the right would be better IMO.
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From portemr/Rosario (13,043)
on June 1, 2012 7:44:26 PM CDT
Thank you pedro for your critique. Perhaps it is due to the fog. Regards, Rosario.
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from phlipside/Jay (559)
on June 1, 2012 6:15:21 PM CDT
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I'm not sold on the crop it square, I kind of like it cropped as is. Wish the horizon line was sharper but atmospheric distortion can make that hard. If I have a complaint I wish the bird was either IN the sun circle or out of it. That half and half bothers me for some reason.
Nice work
Jay
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From portemr/Rosario (13,043)
on June 1, 2012 7:41:57 PM CDT
Hi Jay, Ia glad you like it, thanks for your comments and advice. Regards, Rosario.
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from edwin/Edwin K.W. (224,345)
on June 1, 2012 5:40:38 PM CDT
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Position of the Sun is well placed but I agree that a slight crop from the top would make the presentation would be more effective Rosario, try to do some sharpening on the flying bird and tone down a bit on the hot spots on the Sun.
Cheers........Edwin
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From portemr/Rosario (13,043)
on June 1, 2012 7:39:44 PM CDT
Thank you Edwin. As always, your comments have been useful for me. Regards, Rosario.
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from npaoni/Nicholas (16,274)
on June 1, 2012 5:35:54 PM CDT
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I like the simple composition of this shot and you've done a good job of keeping the sun from burning out and completely dominating the frame. Consider removing some of the top portion of the frame to make a square format. Nick
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From portemr/Rosario (13,043)
on June 1, 2012 7:38:40 PM CDT
Thank you Nick for your review. I will consider to crop it, but this picture is a square format. Regards, Rosario.
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