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from zarzar/Zar (7,347) 
on June 1, 2012 3:45:31 AM CDT
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it is a nice composition and the softness play very well there. I would try to get rid from the objects in the left side, they take some attention. you may move a bit to the left if it is possible.
overall it is a very good one.
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from wolfphotography/Rex (246)
on May 31, 2012 9:04:13 PM CDT
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Very pretty, just to nit pick, I feel the head is to straight up, a slight tilt to our left and a slight turn to our right. It's a great shot either way!
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from vahneesa/Vahneesa (932)
on May 31, 2012 1:30:44 PM CDT
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I like this. Very soft and subtle. Nice coloring and it works well with this model's hair and dress color. It just makes me a bit sad that she seems to be frowning. Would be nice to see a little better expression on her face.
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from ssal/Alex (28,458)
on May 31, 2012 12:56:50 PM CDT
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I like the post a lot. Interesting arrangement with the young lady in an abandoned junk in the wild. I like the lighting and the way you defused it. The girl's posture is very pleasing and fits the flow.
I would desaturate the magenta on the car and the piece of plant sticking out from the left a bit and put a warming filter to it.
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from lurchi/Ulrich (61,710) 
on May 31, 2012 12:39:08 PM CDT
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I like the modern fairy tale approach in this one but feel some details don't quite work yet. First of all her pose and expression look stiff, either direct eye contact or looking anywhere else with a credible reason and/or expression might have made a difference - now she appears to just avoid the camera. Also I'm not quite happy how her legs are interfering, her right foot looks like jammed and her right hand is lost. For my taste there's a little too much junk visible at the image's left border. Finally the contrast between the overall added blur and the clearness on the truck's hood and nose is pretty strong. Nice concept to keep on trying though.
Regards, U.
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from esspressoman/Jon (23,225)
on May 31, 2012 11:43:04 AM CDT
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Love the feel of this... kind of dreamy. The composition and subdued colors are quite appealing. Not too sure about the amount of haziness (or blurring)... might be a bit too much for my taste, but the model, the pose and the setting all work well, IMHO. Regards, ~Jon
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