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" How should I complete the wall ? "

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Title     " How should I complete the wall ? "
Photographer     angedazur/Jean (15,068) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     The Dark Side
Category     Abstract
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 29, 2012 7:47:46 PM CDT
Views     186
Rating     6 Thumb-up

Another from "The dark side" series.

Thanks for viewing and critiques,

Regards, Jean.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ekans4460/Patrice (7,664) Send mail to this user on May 30, 2012 12:37:25 PM CDT (2) Early critique

Two great parts of a wall - it's almost like they are two separate images. Great abstract composition with appealing textures & lighting. Nice cropping.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ssal/Alex (27,124) Send mail to this user on May 29, 2012 9:19:19 PM CDT (2) Early critique

The half exposed wall makes a good abstract pattern. It also symbolize destruction with time.

I would increase the contrast of the bricks and change the color of the white wall to light brown or beige and it seems to go better than white.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from arnesaknussen/Tom (4,493) Send mail to this user on May 29, 2012 8:51:08 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Intriguing photograph. One could look at this a long time and see different things. Are the bricks the inside portion or is the wall? Sense would say that the white portion is plaster covering brick, but your shot tricks one into both perspectives. Very nice detail on both areas.

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From angedazur/Jean (15,068) Send mail to this user on May 29, 2012 8:55:54 PM CDT

Thanks Tim, i am glad you like it, Best regards, Jean.

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From dutchincle/Bas (768) Send mail to this user on May 29, 2012 8:04:11 PM CDT

Love the Pink Floyd reference!

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From angedazur/Jean (15,068) Send mail to this user on May 29, 2012 8:47:10 PM CDT

Thanks Bas, i invite you to look at the Dark Side serie on my web site .

regards, Jean.

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