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San Paul

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Title     San Paul
Photographer     marcoconsoli/Marco (3) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Places
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     2 sec
Categories     Architecture
Cityscape
Urban
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 27, 2012 10:35:42 PM CDT
Views     280
Rating     2 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from gerryb/Gerard (2,220) Send mail to this user on May 28, 2012 5:08:56 AM CDT (3) Early critique

In addition to the previous critique, possibly looking at a portrait crop of the right hand side of the image thus using the bright road as a means to lead the viewer. The image is nicely divided into thirds hence i would not suggest cropping it to a pano unless it was symmetrical around the horizon.

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Thumb-up    from samhu/Samhu (198) Send mail to this user on May 27, 2012 11:54:14 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Nice attempt. It really manages to capture the vista seen really well. Unfortunately, that vista includes that somewhat intrusive, bare, slab-sided "outhouse" in the foreground that is quite distracting to the overall panaroma. Could you have moved around a bit to minimise or exclude it from the image? Yes, it is nice to have something in the foreground, but it should compliment, not draw undue attention to itself in the the overall image (which is the vista). Finally, I would crop a little of the featureless sky off, and increase the overall contrast of the shot on the PC, to help with the noticeable lack of "snap" in the image (sharpness, colour saturation, black level), probably due to high ISO set/selected by camera. Hope this is helpful. Thanks for sharing. Happy snapping!

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