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" ...with you ear against the wall "

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Title     " ...with you ear against the wall "
Photographer     angedazur/Jean (15,068) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     The Dark Side
Category     Abstract
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 27, 2012 6:38:35 PM CDT
Views     154
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Regards, Jean.

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Thumb-up    from leren/Luc (32,466) Send mail to this user on May 28, 2012 3:21:22 AM CDT (3) Early critique

Hi Jean, hard lit wall, repetitive pattern, traces of 'the ear' that listened in close, but was torn away. The imagery is clear, the layered/switching pattern is not without interest,... yet, the lens induced curvature steadily pulls my attention from venturing deeper in form/structure/meaning. I.e. the technology puts a stop to my interest. Perhaps correcting the curvature, straightening the horizontal lines in post-edit would lift that barrier for me. In follow-up shots a longer distance from the subject, less wide-angled, might do the same trick. Take care. Luc

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