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Title     family portrait I
Photographer     berilula/Gabriel (594) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Portraits
Categories     Family
Portrait
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 25, 2012 5:27:40 PM CDT
Views     365
Rating     8 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from muralist0221/George (7,883) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 9:57:25 PM CDT (3)

Putting the heads together to form an upsidedown triangle makes this shot for me. Like the black and white choice. The squinting eyes might be a problem. Also has a vintage touch.

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From berilula/Gabriel (594) Send mail to this user on May 26, 2012 7:52:06 AM CDT

thank you, George!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from portemr/Rosario (13,019) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 9:20:29 PM CDT (4) Early critique

Hi Gabriel. Looking at this picture made smile at me too. I love the expressions of happiness of everyone, especially the man, although his eyes are closed (by laughing), has a very interesting expression. I also like the treatment you've given to the image. Regards, Rosario.

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From berilula/Gabriel (594) Send mail to this user on May 26, 2012 7:54:08 AM CDT

enjoy, Rosario, and thanks!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from edwin/Edwin K.W. (224,228) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 6:21:35 PM CDT (5) Early critique

A happy family Gabriel, but what I would like to see better is on the eyes of both girls, I wish there would be more light on the eye of the girl with darker hair. The vintage look on the photo looks good me too.

Cheers.........Edwin

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From berilula/Gabriel (594) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 8:05:41 PM CDT

cheers, Edwin, and thanks!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from guddu21/Gurbinder (565) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 5:56:15 PM CDT (5) Early critique

Hello Gabriel, very charming people and very nice classic portrait, color tone is working for me.....but the border is ruining it, did you add a vignette of clouds over image, a plain or grungy vignette with minimal opacity will do better IMO. Best wishes!!!

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From berilula/Gabriel (594) Send mail to this user on May 25, 2012 8:08:59 PM CDT

thanks, Gurbinder!... i keep that in mind (border), you could be right. thanks again!

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