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		from gaze/Gary (4,385) on May 25, 2012 8:30:24 AM CDT (1) I like your POV here with perfect focus on those lovely brown eyes with nice catches. The face is perfectly placed in the frame. You could try cropping a little from the LHS to the elbow to remove the very bright pants, which are a little distracting. It might be fun to experiment with blurring the already blurred section even a little further. All in all a very nice photo with a nice attentive expression on the girl. Reply  Show ratings  From jopogs/Mark (3) on May 25, 2012 1:02:59 PM CDT thanks next time ill try to experiment more! Reply
		from michal235/Michal (125,445) on May 25, 2012 4:10:03 AM CDT (1) Welcome to photoSIG, Mark, Good angle view and eyes contact in this portrait work. However due to the fact that girl's left hand's elbow is cutted I would prefer to see more space in down part of photo. Beside I think that I would prefer to try to remove or simply clone out this white ring spot which is situated near girl's right hand's elbow, of cource in case if it isn't an element of girl's cloth. Good sharpness on face, however maybe only I think that I would prefer to try to reduce a little bit brightness from left side of girl's face, of course if it will be necessary. Suggestion for future, try to submit here a larger file with higher resolution to better see details. Regards, Michal. Reply  Show ratings  From jopogs/Mark (3) on May 25, 2012 4:17:28 AM CDT thank you thats a big help for a amateur like me! Reply

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