Lace 2

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		from bigotis/Eugene (14,468) on May 23, 2012 11:46:09 PM CDT (0) If you want my honest opinion Scott, you have a model with a beautiful face and let a monkey apply the grease paint. If you're going to get that close, it better be done in a more precise and artistic manner. Compositionally, the light is way off balance on her face vs the rest of the image (left side vs right side of the image) and needs to be better balanced. And, the lower left corner of the frame shows a tiny part of her armpit - I'd clone it out and nobody would be the wiser. That said, I do like how you've framed it and I like her expression. Regards. Reply  Show ratings  From beegirl/Mieka (2,879) on May 25, 2012 4:50:29 AM CDT i really really agree! let someone else do the make up! Reply
		from rhino30349/Ryan (7,511) on May 23, 2012 9:52:17 PM CDT (0) Scott, a nice image, here are some ideas for improvement...1). more seperation between model and background, forcing the BG OOF, 2). bottom left crop needs to lose the armpit. Also, it's maybe a touch too saturated for my taste. thanks for sharing, regards, Ryan Reply  Show ratings
		from exposurestudio/Sean (899) on May 23, 2012 9:23:55 PM CDT (1) Scott, You have captured a grea image with excellent overall sharpness, colour and composition. Although my eyes are drawn to the subject, they are also quickly drawn away with the busy background. There are almost too many textures and shapes between the girl, her suspenders, the make-up and background. Shooting againts a solid background would have helped the image a lot. Overall great work. Keep it coming. Cheers, Sean Reply  Show ratings

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