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from georgejung/Mato (2,302) 
on June 13, 2012 9:50:15 AM CDT
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As they say - the Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I like that the shutter speed is so fast and that everything is frozen (and looks unnatural ;) ). I love the composition and her expression and as a neat touch the reflections on the floor.
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from davidkl/David (7,402)
on May 22, 2012 2:33:15 PM CDT
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Hi David,
Beautiful use of the window side light - maybe just a drop too hot but also has that nice high key effect with everything in the room (except the back rails) being white. On that note - I think I would photoshop out those rails in the back - they compete with the model and make it busier than it needs to be. Very nice work.
Regards.
David
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from ozerbebek1/Ozer (405)
on May 22, 2012 1:58:00 PM CDT
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Lighting is very nice and the model is extraordinary, very interesting. How could you succeed to capture such a still face expression (not like flying, but simply looking at a fixed point with such an innocent expression) and her hairs well in place although the skirt is flying. Thank you for sharing.
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from jroessler/John (14,182) 
on May 22, 2012 11:31:34 AM CDT
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I like the soft lighting and the colors - its sort of a high key image. What I don't like is the model frozen floating in the air. It looks unnatural. My own inclination is to say the shutter speed is to fast. I'd want to see a little blur to show there is intended motion. If you are interested I think you could use of one of Photoshops blurs to add a little motion. I've done it with airplane props. Sometimes its works.
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from michal235/Michal (123,395)
on May 22, 2012 11:18:29 AM CDT
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Pose of your model is well captured here. However a part of her costume blend with her skin on th right side of body. I think that I would prefer to try to correct the intensivity of light use Photoshop, or eventually a little bit more faster shutter speed. Regards, Michal.
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