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from arturdy/Artur (40,359)
on May 22, 2012 3:29:40 AM CDT
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Hard working and tired whell, I see:)! Very good idea with square cropping, it adds simplicity to the work. As well as used colours - gentle, a little bit "washed" (old paint). Well done:)! Rgds, Artur
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from roxxie2013/Roxxie (840)
on May 21, 2012 4:20:50 PM CDT
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A bit of good eye, a bit of sheer luck, a bit of fine idea on postproduction, and there you have it: nearly perfect picture. Nearly perfect, I say: you should have recognized that precise square would make it perfect to the bits.
Nevertheless, it's already excellent. Congrats and thanks for sharing.
P.S. Oh, yes: I don't mind this pic being too yellow. Don't lower the saturation, keep it.
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from portemr/Rosario (12,971)
on May 20, 2012 5:00:49 PM CDT
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Hi Sebastian. One finds beautiful things to photograph in the most unexpected places. What a great eye! I like this bright yellow, shapes and texture. Good job. Rosario.
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from ufuksandalci/Ufuk (1,738)
on May 20, 2012 4:47:54 PM CDT
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This is an eye cathing brilliant abstract. Central positioning works well because of an interesting symmetry. Vivid yellow is atractive but a bit too bright. Thanks for sharing.
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from olmosfamily/Enrique (42,776)
on May 20, 2012 4:41:49 PM CDT
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Great detail on this one, Sebastian. I like the symmetry of it. Find the picture a touch too bright, though. Perhaps a little tweak on saturation levels would help?
Cheers, Rick.
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From stmv/Sebastian (59,786)
on May 20, 2012 9:44:12 PM CDT
it is a bright yellow in real life, but can tone down, thanks.
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From stmv/Sebastian (59,786)
on May 22, 2012 7:39:04 AM CDT
funny, this picture had wheels,,, and slowly crept up in critiques.
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