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Photographer     twoguyswithglasses/Adrian (3) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Two Guys With Glasses
F-stop     f/11
Shutter speed     1/125 sec
Categories     Expression
Portrait
Black and White
Digital back/sensor     CMOS 10MP 1.6 crop
Lens     135mm Canon f/2.0
Camera     EOS 1000D
Format     "ISO 100"
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 20, 2012 3:18:55 PM CDT
Views     945
Rating     3 Thumb-up

My first real attempt at portrait photography in the studio, I am looking for some tips and critique on improving my lighting and model guidance. ANY critique would be greatly appreciated.

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Thumb-up    from pilotlee/Pilot (23,312) Send mail to this user on May 21, 2012 12:23:06 AM CDT (2) Early critique

A tastseful portrait with good sharpness and composition. Eye contact is very good as well. However, the picture is a bit dim which may enrich the model's mystical atmosphere but weaken the clarity of the image. To my eye, I would prefer to brighten up slightly the picture though.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from go/Gilad (2,290) Send mail to this user on May 20, 2012 4:54:33 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Adrian, welcome to photosig. I'm happy to be the first one to rate your photo. I like this type of portrait that keeps the woman unidentified and mysterious. Eye contact is good and the eye hidden behind her hair adds to the mystery. Lighting is fine. Thanks for sharing. -G

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From twoguyswithglasses/Adrian (3) Send mail to this user on May 20, 2012 5:39:05 PM CDT

Thank you for welcoming me! I am glad to hear the lighting is OK! :) Thanks for the comment!

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