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Caught having Fun

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Title     Caught having Fun
Photographer     durr3/Durr (340) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Misc Street
Categories     Decisive Moment
Emotive
Nature
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 20, 2012 12:36:51 PM CDT
Views     892
Rating     3 Thumb-up

at Camp Kickapoo.

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Thumb-up    from mikewebb/Mike (13,814) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 20, 2012 3:00:59 PM CDT (2) Early critique

I think you need to ask yourself just what you want the viewer to look at. I'm guessing not that vibrant bikini top in which case you could desaturate it a bit. I'm guessing you do want me to look at the girls's faces especially the one on the left in which case a tighter crop would probably help. I'm left wondering if B&W might not eliminate many distractions and let me work out the fun bit. At the moment I'm assuming these girls were caught in flagrante as it were and I'm not convinced that's true.

Mike

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Thumb-up    from bayouself/C R (146) Send mail to this user on May 20, 2012 1:46:47 PM CDT (2) Early critique

I'm having a hard time figuring out what this photo is all about as well but it garners attention and I continue to look.

The colors are vibrant and there is a lot of detail on the ladies' tattoos and in the grass. The dark parts of their hair lacks detail.

I think it's unusual but am drawn to it and wonder about the fun.

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Thumb-up    from suchit/Suchit (24,339) Send mail to this user on May 20, 2012 12:46:26 PM CDT (2) Early critique

I find it a bit difficult toe figure this image out. There are too many distracting elements but if they were hiding then that would make sense. They seem to be playing but that is not quite clear. Technically alright but I'm unsure of the photographer's intent.

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