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"Welcome to the store"

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Title     "Welcome to the store"
Photographer     ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Thelma
Categories     Abstract
Random
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 18, 2012 12:45:34 PM CDT
Views     252
Rating     7 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from railhead/Mike (14,662) Send mail to this user on May 23, 2012 4:19:58 AM CDT (1)

this photograph has a simplicity that appeals to me, but it looks like it is just a little bit too grey. not a lot, but a little.

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From ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 23, 2012 12:12:37 PM CDT

Thank you Mike.

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Thumb-up    from pilotlee/Pilot (22,956) Send mail to this user on May 19, 2012 9:25:06 AM CDT (1)

Good photographer's eye and impressive composition too. As the DOF is shallow and the textures on wall are so appreciable, I will thus expect the whole picture being in good focus but not only the words printing on the black area. Also agree that it would be helpful if increase a bit of the contrast. Nice work anyway.

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From ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 19, 2012 9:32:09 AM CDT

Thank you Pilot

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Thumb-up    from yrn1/Jeroen (397) Send mail to this user on May 18, 2012 4:08:56 PM CDT (5) Early critique

I'm a fan of this kind of shot. I think it would be a lot better if the (local) contrast were increased quite a bit, to make it 'pop' a bit more. Thanks for sharing!

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From ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 19, 2012 2:48:20 AM CDT

Thank you Jeroen

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from thewilkinsdistinctio/Ben (710) Send mail to this user on May 18, 2012 3:05:39 PM CDT (5) Early critique

The image doesn't really appeal to me artisticly, but the way you handled it is well done. I like the sharpness and the layout, but I think I might have preferred colour over B&W. Overall, though, not bad. One last look and I see the reflection in the glass and wonder if a polarizer could have been used to reduced it. Ben

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From ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 18, 2012 3:10:35 PM CDT

Thank you Ben.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mojaveh/Mehrdad (52,650) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 18, 2012 12:59:17 PM CDT (5) Early critique

Good eye on it and very pleasant composition dear Patrice. The texture on the wall looks fine. Window has been located in its best place in photo frame. TFS, Mehrdad

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From ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 18, 2012 2:30:53 PM CDT

Thank you Mehrdad

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