Lonely


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Title     Lonely
Photographer     milca604/Eric (55) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Nature
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     1/60 sec
Category     Nature
Lens     Canon EF 28-80mm f/3.5-5.6
Camera     Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 17, 2012 1:42:43 AM CDT
Views     193
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from livinginparadise/Stephen (135) Send mail to this user on May 17, 2012 1:52:57 AM CDT (2) Early critique

I like your colours. You have made good use of the bokeh to give a feeling of depth and I like your background composition. The lens appears to give rather harsh bokeh (this obviously relates to your gear rather than your skill). The biggest problem I find with this photo is the foreground - it doesn't appear to tell a coherent story. Also the relationship between the foreground and the midground doesn't work for me.

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From milca604/Eric (55) Send mail to this user on May 17, 2012 2:30:35 AM CDT

Thank you for your comment. I recently bought my first DSLR, a second hand 5d2, and saving up for new lens. The lens I have is a 10 year old 28-80 plastic lens. That is probably what you are seeing. When I shoot this photo, I wanted the rock to be my subject, but when I look at the photo on my laptop screen, I feel that the green is taking attention from the white rock, but I just don't know how to work around that. I totally agree with your comment. Once again, thank you for your time.

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