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Slinky In Red 3

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Title     Slinky In Red 3
Photographer     arnesaknussen/Tom (4,493) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Arne Saknussen
F-stop     f/5.6
Shutter speed     4 sec
Categories     Abstract
Macro
Lens     Canon 100mm macro
Camera     Canon 50D
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 15, 2012 8:34:43 PM CDT
Views     603
Rating     6 Thumb-up

For me, this is all about searching and experimenting. I find this shot interesting, but not complete. Curious to know what people think.

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Thumb-up    from yellowgrey/Barbro (15,841) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 16, 2012 5:52:14 AM CDT (3)

hi Tom!

The Slinky in red has some uncertainty because of the unsharpness whereas the halfcircle are interesting with its blacks around. /barbro

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Thumb-up    from wolli/Ian (56,900) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 16, 2012 2:40:50 AM CDT (5) Early critique

There's an interesting progression of light, form & line through the frame Tom. The composiition seems a bit "indeterminate" which reduces the effect of the lit slinky.

Regards, Ian.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from kurant/Cengiz (102) Send mail to this user on May 16, 2012 1:35:36 AM CDT (5) Early critique

Altough it did not hit me at the first sight, then it became very interseting. I quite like it. However, it seemed a bit off the focus. Good photo anyway.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from 1canonman/Bruce (9,514) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 15, 2012 8:43:16 PM CDT (6) Early critique

Very cool Tom. The lighting and color are both interesting. I would change the crop a little to see if I could get more symmetry in the lower left corner. I do like the way that the slinky comes out of the corner arching to the right. Perhaps add a little more light to the right---symmetry again. Thanks for sharing your work. Bruce

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