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from muunal/Umit (6,988) 
on May 16, 2012 3:49:28 AM CDT
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Hi Yuri, This is a fine portrait. The exposure on white dress is just right. Eye contact and model's pose are great. However, the chair at the BG is distracting. TFS. Umit
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from jd510/Colin (21,196)
on May 15, 2012 3:34:20 PM CDT
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Hi Yuri, a beautiful model with a beautiful smile and with very good eye-contact but the stairs are a bit of a distraction. Good job though - Regards Colin
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from bartbonk/Bill (22,944)
on May 15, 2012 2:42:39 PM CDT
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The photo is very attractive and I very much like the tilt of the head. The sharp focus on the eyes and the good focus on her left hand are great. The less focused right hand could be better. The mirror and the reflection on the floor is well done but the lines of the stairs forming a line above her head is a bit of distraction and limits the apparent space over her head. Overall a very strong 2TU photo. Regards. Bill
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From pautov/Yuri (16,515)
on May 16, 2012 2:24:02 AM CDT
Bill, thank you very much for your high mark and detailed critique!
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from grandpalarry/Larry (6,584)
on May 15, 2012 1:13:22 PM CDT
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This is a very nice photo, Yuri. It's all about the woman here, all else is in peripheral vision when I look at her. I like the soft effect though focus seems perfect. Good job. Interesting use of the mirror and it's reflection of light on the floor. Hair style, personable smile and charming pose all help. You might consider cloning away the small dark spot on the floor near the center, near her right leg.
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from jmrosz/Jan (204,274)
on May 15, 2012 10:09:26 AM CDT
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a Nice girl, well photographed. Good pose and a nice expression/eye contact. Good lighting and a simple, but fine composition. Thanks for sharing.
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from forbes/Mark (4,848)
on May 15, 2012 9:32:17 AM CDT
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Cute model, good expression, too much going on with the doorway and the stairs and the chair and the table all competing in the background. How did you achieve the ghosting affect? ALmost has a slight double exposure look to it.
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From pautov/Yuri (16,515)
on May 15, 2012 9:37:43 AM CDT
Ha-ha, thank you, Mark! In fact its a mirror downstairs and its reflection on the floor.
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From forbes/Mark (4,848)
on May 16, 2012 9:08:44 AM CDT
Looking at it again, I now see it is a mirror, don't know how I missed that the first time.
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