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from tigra37/Fülei (1,540) 
on May 15, 2012 12:24:48 AM CDT
Real powerfull portret , expressiv eyes , interesting combination between hair and backround , but the same problet what I mentioned to your another photo , missing PS ... succes ...
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from bigotis/Eugene (14,463)
on May 14, 2012 7:13:51 PM CDT
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Great model for this type of capture and she sure fits with the BG you've selected.
One thing I really like is your angle of capture. It really brings the viewer into the image. But, unfortunately, I assume you've used a wider end of a lens to shoot her because it looks like it has made her head disporportionately large with comparison to the rest of her body. I don't know if her nose is this size in real life but I suspect not. Perhaps you could carefully use liquify in PP and work it just a bit (if you desired to). The distortion has done great things for her eyes but not so great for her nose.
One other thing I noticed is that the light is definitely brighter on her left arm than her right arm but not noticably different on her face. Don't know if you were goig for that effect or not.
Your horizontal lines could stand to be rotated a little counterclockwise as the image lists a little to the right.
But, great hair and the eyes go real well with the rest of her and the BG (and I like the eye contact). She'd probably be a good candidate to shoot again. Regards.
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from smoke11/Patrick (3,104) 
on May 14, 2012 7:07:13 PM CDT
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What an interesting looking woman. The blue in the hair looks a little too tuned up, but it's balanced by the green and the mural, so perhaps it is the effect you want. If you have a angle with the camera just a little lower (less of angle of her looking up), that might potentially be interesting. But overall, like the work.
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