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Twilight in Udaipur

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Title     Twilight in Udaipur
Photographer     jmrosz/Jan (203,900) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     India Noord
F-stop     f/6.3
Shutter speed     1/500 sec
Categories     Cityscape
Landscape
Snapshot
Filter     Polarizer
Lens     Nikon 16-85mm f/3.5-5.6 (@50mm)
Camera     Nikon D2X
Film     280 asa
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 10, 2012 8:59:09 AM CDT
Views     435
Rating     5 Thumb-up

a View over Lake Pichola (Udaipur). Picture shoot from the hotel-roof.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from fiorucci123/Mario G (31,198) Send mail to this user on May 10, 2012 11:22:05 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Very good captured moment. I like the predominant colors of the late afternoon. I coincide with the suggestion of the building. Good work. Regards

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Thumb-up    from npaoni/Nicholas (16,110) Send mail to this user on May 10, 2012 10:08:46 AM CDT (1) Early critique

This is a very pleasant scene Jan. I like the low light and tranquil colors. Focus and DOF are also good. I agree that the scene would be better without the building on the lower right corner. IMO the sun with its concentric rings overpowers this shot though and that lowers the impact for me some. Nick

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from vtie/Vtie (7,061) Send mail to this user on May 10, 2012 9:11:51 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Beautiful sunset colors, and a lovely scene. Excellent exposure under difficult circumstances. Personally, I consider the building on the right foreground corner distracting. I think you can improve the composition by cropping away the right part, removing that building. That would give a nice composition with the boats in the lower left corner balancing the sun in the upper right corner.

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From jmrosz/Jan (203,900) Send mail to this user on May 10, 2012 9:35:11 AM CDT

Hello Vtie, I will remove the building at my TIFF-file. Thanks, Jan.

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