Framed (edited & re-submitted)


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Title     Framed (edited & re-submitted)
Photographer     olymario/Mario (837) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Creatures
F-stop     f/4
Shutter speed     1/500 sec
Categories     Nature
Avian
2012 - year
Lens     Olympus 50-200mm f2.8-3.5 ZD
Camera     Olympus E-30
Format     .jpg
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 8, 2012 2:53:29 AM CDT
Views     370
Rating     8 Thumb-up

An Australian superb fairywren in the tail end of his breeding plumage. In mating season his head and breast would be coverd in brillian blue feathers of varying shades. I'm re-submitting this photo taking into account some suggestions made on a perviously submitted version, with thanks to those who commented and critiqued.

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Thumb-up    from rtw12/Reg (1,039) Send mail to this user on May 9, 2012 4:41:05 AM CDT (1)

Nice sharp shot of this wren, good detail in the feathers, very nice green background, like the angle of the iron work. Reg

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from michal235/Michal (123,395) Send mail to this user on May 8, 2012 5:37:20 AM CDT (2) Early critique

In my opinion this version works well for me as a more close-up version of your previous submission. Pose of this bird is well captured. Nice colors and details. Beside green color in background gives a good color contrast here. Well seen. Regards, Michal.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ektachrome/Francesco (13,050) Send mail to this user on May 8, 2012 5:23:57 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Grate framing and use of rusted stand, perfect focus and lucky catch. i think it's very close to 3TU (the appearance of the foliage in the BG is a bit weird to me).. anyway.. i round it up. Cheers!

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ufuksandalci/Ufuk (1,738) Send mail to this user on May 8, 2012 4:36:10 AM CDT (3) Early critique

I think reframing worked beatiful Mario. THe triangles, which were formerly distracting, became an esthetic element now. Well done. Regards

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Non-conforming thumb-up Non-conforming thumb-up    from nelanet/Vlasta (285) Send mail to this user on May 8, 2012 3:01:05 AM CDT

Hi Mario.Very beautiful photos. I love the colors and sharpness of photos. Beautiful moment captured. Good job.Regards Vlasta

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