Women on the beach


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Title     Women on the beach
Photographer     aliibnahmad/Jaeghie (1,113) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Africa
F-stop     f/8
Shutter speed     1/250 sec
Categories     Documentary
Snapshot
Travel
Lens     Canon EF28-300mm F3.5-5.6L IS USM
Camera     Canon EOS-1D Mark II N
Format     RAW
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     May 3, 2012 9:19:44 AM CDT
Views     288
Rating     6 Thumb-up

I took this photo in Goree Island near Dakar, the capital of Senegal.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ekans4460/Patrice (7,658) Send mail to this user on May 6, 2012 8:32:12 PM CDT (1)

A great souvenir for me.I've seen thet for a year. I like the composition and colors. It's a nice capture of real life in Senegal and a perfect atmosphere. Well done;

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From aliibnahmad/Jaeghie (1,113) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 9, 2012 10:10:54 PM CDT

Thanks a lot, Patrice.

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Thumb-up    from stmv/Sebastian (59,810) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 3, 2012 9:38:25 AM CDT (1) Early critique

good snap, a bit too tight for me, could title it experienced/still learning, but overall interesting photo, too bad the second one has the shadow.

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From aliibnahmad/Jaeghie (1,113) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 4, 2012 9:41:30 PM CDT

Thank you very much.

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Thumb-up    from slimandy/Andrew (21,116) Send mail to this user on May 3, 2012 9:36:40 AM CDT (2) Early critique

I really like the colour in the shot but I don't like the way you have framed it. I really feel you needed a landscape orientation with more room in front of them as if to walk into. I also find the small tuft of white in the sea is a distraction that you could clone out or even crop. the light could be harsh on the white t-shirt but you've done a good job with that because it doesn't bother me.

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From aliibnahmad/Jaeghie (1,113) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 4, 2012 9:40:15 PM CDT

Yes, you are right. I don't like the frame of this photo so much either. I believe it should be a bit wider. Thanks a lot.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from oevt/Oscar (32,292) Send mail to this user on May 3, 2012 9:36:18 AM CDT (1) Early critique

I love the color contrast the chosen frame and location it does show the etnocenter well once you have given the line on location...a horizontal format makes me wonder I did researched on your 'heavy' lens impressive resolution great exposure and focus nice choice of maths..regards...O

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From aliibnahmad/Jaeghie (1,113) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on May 4, 2012 9:39:04 PM CDT

Thank you very much for your critique.

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