Alone & together


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Title     Alone & together
Photographer     samias/Asghar (3,654) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     documentry
Categories     Documentary
Emotive
Lens     AF-S NIKKOR 24-70 f/2.8G ED
Camera     Nikon D700
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     April 22, 2012 8:01:55 AM CDT
Views     384
Rating     4 Thumb-up

Brickyard factory

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Thumb-down    from milena11/Milena (4,892) Send mail to this user on April 23, 2012 3:18:21 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Hi Asghar, I am sorry but this photo doesn't work for me. It is spoilt by excess of post-processing, which, in this kind of pictures is not appropriate, in my opinion. The children don't stand out at all from the stacks of bricks. They look flat. It's a pity. The shot has a lot of potential, but it's spoilt. Ciao Milena

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From samias/Asghar (3,654) Send mail to this user on April 23, 2012 5:18:58 AM CDT

Hi Milena , thank you for your time and comment , everybody can learn better from who are not accept with him or her , i wish the best shots for you .

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from go/Gilad (2,290) Send mail to this user on April 22, 2012 8:42:50 AM CDT (1) Early critique

This is an instance when you can claim that a picture speaks louder then a thousand words. Proper perspective, aligning the rows of bricks along the diagonal of the picture, with the kids framed in the right place. Thanks for sharing. -G

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From samias/Asghar (3,654) Send mail to this user on April 22, 2012 12:27:50 PM CDT

Hi Gilad , thank you for your time and kind comment .Happy shots for you .

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jmrosz/Jan (204,269) Send mail to this user on April 22, 2012 8:10:32 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Great composition, thanks the diagonal lines of the stones. The children are at a fine place. Good lighting, but a bit to dark for me... (HDR ?).

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From samias/Asghar (3,654) Send mail to this user on April 22, 2012 8:17:53 AM CDT

Hi Jan , thank you for your time and kind comment , I wanted to transfer my feeling by this editing and this is not a HDR , happy best shots for you .

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