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from speedphoto/Luc (13,136) 
on March 24, 2012 7:29:54 AM CDT
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Really wonderful portrait of this young pretty girl. Light was of course hard but you still made good light on your model. I like her expression, looks not really friendly but it looks like a strong personality, with her strong look. Very nice background. Beautiful portrait, Jan !!! Regards, Luc
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from montag/Yechiel (10,432)
on March 24, 2012 3:15:28 AM CDT
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Beautiful little girl, Jan
Her pretty face expresses sadness and tension. Very good, clear and focused photo. May be a white frame might add a bit of optimism to the photo.
Thanks,
Yechiel
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from suppiluliuma/Erdem (7,100)
on March 23, 2012 1:14:46 PM CDT
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She is a beauty. Very decisive look, the whites on her eyes make her even more lively despite the strong shadows. We often complain about the shadows, but here, they seem to add another dimension to the shot. The only distraction would be the strong, dark shadow line below her chin.
The background is very good, soft and blurred. This feature brings the pink dress even more foreward.
The sharpness might be considered a bit overdone, resulting in a grainy texture in the b/g. On her left-handside, just above her shoulder, there is sensor dust that could be removed, along with what seems to be a brush stain.
All in all that's a wonderful model that shouldn't have been missed.
TFS.
With friendship,
Erdem
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From jmrosz/Jan (204,038)
on March 24, 2012 1:52:04 AM CDT
Thanks Erdem, I cleaned my TIFF-file. Best regards, Jan.
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