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a Shop with a Smile

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Title     a Shop with a Smile
Photographer     jmrosz/Jan (203,900) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     India Noord
F-stop     f/8
Shutter speed     1/125 sec
Categories     Documentary
Portrait
Street Photography
Filter     Polarizer
Lens     Nikon 16-85mm f/3.5-5.6 (@25mm)
Camera     Nikon D2X
Film     200 ASA
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 26, 2011 11:58:53 AM CST
Views     200
Rating     2 Thumb-up

a Young shop-assistant in Mahansar.

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Thumb-up    from georgejung/Mato (2,302) Send mail to this user on November 27, 2011 10:56:31 AM CST (2) Early critique

Nice photo of the street "shop". I was also thinking about the boy in the background. Shallower DOF and everything would be ok. But if we consider the boy in the background as a part of the story (what you suggest and I find it quite ok) than a different composition is needed.

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From jmrosz/Jan (203,900) Send mail to this user on November 27, 2011 10:58:05 AM CST

Hello Mato, not only the boy, also the other peoples. He is sitting on the street.. Maybe a less DOF was better. Kr, Jan.

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Thumb-up    from klamcake/Tom (5,324) Send mail to this user on November 26, 2011 12:03:29 PM CST (5) Early critique

I like everything about it except the boy in the background. He is a major distraction to an other wise fine local portrait. He competes directly for the viewer's attention.

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From jmrosz/Jan (203,900) Send mail to this user on November 26, 2011 12:16:41 PM CST

Hello Tom, this is the environment where the boy in lives and works, I like it on the picture. But it was photographic better without. Thanks, Jan.

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