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		from dugt/Doug (2,746) on October 23, 2011 10:32:57 PM CDT (1) The birds head is in great focus but it is too close to center horizontally. If you cropped the right side, as others suggested, it would bring the head closer to the ideal rule of thirds focal point and also remove the least interesting part of the photo. If you crop some of the top too it will be like blowing up the head and that look great since the head and eye are so nice and sharp. Reply  Show ratings  From garran/Roland (14,892) on October 24, 2011 12:05:47 AM CDT that definitely seems to be the consensus, good points, thank you Doug. Reply
		from redfive/Jonathan (435) on October 23, 2011 1:47:09 PM CDT (2) A nicely seen shot, with good focus around the birds eye. Background is not to distracting, just a shame you cannot see it's feet. Maybe try turning the camera to the vertical. Reply  Show ratings  From garran/Roland (14,892) on October 23, 2011 2:00:44 PM CDT much appreciated Jonathan Reply
		from michal235/Michal (123,118) on October 23, 2011 12:50:31 PM CDT (2) Hi Roland. Great portrait. Good lighting, sharpness and nice details. Maybe only I would like to suggest you to try to cropp a little bit right side of photo due to the fact that there are some elements out of the focus. Beside I would prefer to see a little bit more space in down part of photo, because a prt of bird is cutted. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Michal. Reply  Show ratings  From garran/Roland (14,892) on October 23, 2011 1:38:50 PM CDT thank you very much Michal Reply

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