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from ajcook/Andrew (252) 
on June 28, 2011 2:55:58 PM CDT
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This is an interesting justaposition of patterns. On close look the different textures of the materials come out. Without the title I think it would have taken me a few seconds to work out what it was - and I like that.
My one negative is the shirt looks a little blown out at the top?
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From paulrollin/Paul (6,001)
on June 28, 2011 3:08:45 PM CDT
Andrew: Thanks for the view, and the critique. Your points are well taken. I agree, the shirt portion of the image has some issues. Thanks, again. Paul
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from hectorn/Hector (30,774) 
on June 28, 2011 2:33:10 PM CDT
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Hi. Interesting way to obtain an abstract composition from an everyday scene. The contrast of textures and shapes works well. Perhaps a more square crop could work better for this kind of composition. Regards.
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from thpeterson/Tommy (1,931)
on June 28, 2011 12:12:36 PM CDT
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your composition hurts the photo. i feel that the tie is cropped and so is the suit, so that puts the shirt in the middle and the tie and jacket sort of vignette and enclose the shirt bringing attention to it rather than the whole scene or just the jacket or tie. doing that drives your eye to the least interesting thing in the photo. i would suggest cropping looser to see the shirt on the other side of the tie, that way the tie would become more of a focus of the image. tommy
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From paulrollin/Paul (6,001)
on June 28, 2011 12:14:02 PM CDT
Tommy: Thanks for the view, and the very helpful critique. Thanks again. Paul
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From massimolivio/Massimo (380)
on June 29, 2011 5:00:46 AM CDT
I do not want to give a 1 down but I really do not se anything interesting in here. If intention was to create an abstract I woud crop the image 50% in its width, probably then may be more intriguing.
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