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from alfonso/Alfonso (503) 
on June 19, 2011 10:58:09 AM CDT
GREAT! Ciao
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from suchit/Suchit (24,343)
on June 19, 2011 8:22:02 AM CDT
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This one is a 1.5TU for me. I like the pose but the CW lean of the image is disturbing. A bit on the risk-side for a model who appears young. Her expression and yellow behind works well here. Different image but I like this better than http://www.photosig.com/go/photos/view?id=2483527&forward=viewportfolio
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from zarzar/Zar (7,326)
on June 19, 2011 4:43:34 AM CDT
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It is a very nice photo; the girl looks so fresh and soft. The raised dress adds some teasing and interesting.
The lintel looks inclined and the girl is not. That inclined disturb me. Also the dress is a bit too light.
(Sorry for my English).
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from jmrosz/Jan (204,274)
on June 19, 2011 2:31:58 AM CDT
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a Beautiful portrait of a young girl, it looks so natural. Good lighting for the fine colours. Nice composition also. The expression and eye contact are beautiful.
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from salbakulawmd/Vans (8,793)
on June 18, 2011 11:51:17 PM CDT
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The framing works very well...just looking in a mirror with good lightning and contrast, could be potential photo and a possible 3TU if the feet were included, regards vans
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from jaygheiser/Jay (10,027)
on June 18, 2011 11:10:23 PM CDT
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A pretty girl in a grotty setting can be very striking if done well, and I think that this is well executed. The scene is creepy, with the splotchy walls, and the horrid pastel colors, and the mold spots. The rightwards tilt of the door frames adds to the sense of unease. The model is well lit, with a mysterious expression and body language suggesting she's just finished moving, or will move in a second. Is she saying "Are you coming in?" or "Will you take me away from here?" Ambiguity makes this a thought provoking picture that requires a second, and third look. The way she is holding her skirt is probably sending a message too (viewer's choice), and compositionally, it adds a great deal of dynamism, keeping the picture from being too symmetric. It would be a great picture if both her hands were visible.
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from azsteve/Stephen (1,233)
on June 18, 2011 9:09:42 PM CDT
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Ricky, Well exposed and focused. The young lady is a wonderful subject, I would like to see her in a different setting. Thanks for sharing, Steve
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from rickypan/Ricky (1,836)
on June 18, 2011 7:09:57 PM CDT
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Nic shot, I like the background lighting and the location. the color is so nice. I prefer to see the model's left hand which is cutoff. But maybe just personal preference.
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