Just mist II


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Title     Just mist II
Photographer     akim13/Jan (119) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Andre Sempre
Category     Landscape
Camera     Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     August 31, 2010 2:10:30 AM CDT
Views     766
Rating     10 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from erikn/Erik (3,724) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 11:13:43 AM CDT (2)

This is an excellent capture of the mist and morning light. The composition work fine as well, but the branches at the left are distracting.

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Thumb-up    from damocaz/Damian (334) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 10:02:36 AM CDT (1)

Hi Jan, for me this is an "almost there" photo. You were there at the right time and place and exposed the image pretty well. With a few small adjustments this could be dramatically improved, a crop of the foreground, some straightening of the horizon and perhaps playing about with the levels and curves a little. Nice effort though.

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Thumb-up    from drewaltizer/Drew (1,283) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 5:04:12 AM CDT (1)

What a beautiful moment to see. I think that this image would be raised to another level with a few changes. First, it seems un-level. Second, the other commenter is correct that it's a little hot on the left. Finally I think you could crop the left just inside of the pine and on the bottom just below the evergreens and take out he random remaining branches for a much more serene image.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ovetro/Othmar 'Odo' (4,185) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 4:51:59 AM CDT (1) Early critique

What a great mood you captured here! There is nothing that I should critic. Have a fine Day, Odo

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from michal235/Michal (123,187) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 3:06:11 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Moody motive with mist, but in my opinion this thoto could be a little bit more darkness. Maybe it will be better to cropp a little bit foreground, down part of photo, because in my opinion these plants on the left side distract here a little bit. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Michal.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from bigsel/James (4,818) Send mail to this user on August 31, 2010 2:30:18 AM CDT (2) Early critique

This photo has a nice feel to it, a bit eary. I would have liked the shot a touch darker though, and the left handside is a bit hot looking, thanks for sharing.

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From tami1/Tami (0) Send mail to this user on September 7, 2010 4:33:03 AM CDT

simply superb

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